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can u just remove the locked chapters and just update when the chapters are supposed to i really like this story but locked chapters are irritating
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Can see a lot of potential, and one advice don't force romance please, it's so cringe everybody does that nowadays, other than that you doing great, personally I like your pacing a lot, keep going man.
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can u just remove the locked chapters and just update when the chapters are supposed to i really like this story but locked chapters are irritating
Can see a lot of potential, and one advice don't force romance please, it's so cringe everybody does that nowadays, other than that you doing great, personally I like your pacing a lot, keep going man.