13評論
4.68
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
This is disgusting, the author of this fanfic made the Uchihas pathetic pacifists... they have 0 dignity here, and the MC has 0 dignity and pride... he is pathetic and a coward (even at the first meeting he showed himself to be a dog-licker with the empress). They are insulted and want to kill them (and they didn’t even see anything wrong with that...).
It is really good i recommend it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good translation and a good fanfic but the character could be better and I hate harem
Es una novela excelente 😉👌🏻 tiene un desarrollo de la trama sólido y fluido con escenarios bien pensados y más aún el progreso sistemático y escalonado de los miembros del plan Uchiha y sus momentos de combate son geniales 🤙🏻 una novela con mucho potencial espero más capítulos, lo recomiendo
imma stack the chapter before reading. good luck tho and i hope this is as good as your other projects
I'm not exactly familiar on how biology works in One Piece. But I do know people can grow up to be very tall. Will this be the case for the Uchiha? Will they affected the longer they live there?
This is disgusting, the author of this fanfic made the Uchihas pathetic pacifists... they have 0 dignity here, and the MC has 0 dignity and pride... he is pathetic and a coward (even at the first meeting he showed himself to be a dog-licker with the empress). They are insulted and want to kill them (and they didn’t even see anything wrong with that...).
It is really good i recommend it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good translation and a good fanfic but the character could be better and I hate harem
Es una novela excelente 😉👌🏻 tiene un desarrollo de la trama sólido y fluido con escenarios bien pensados y más aún el progreso sistemático y escalonado de los miembros del plan Uchiha y sus momentos de combate son geniales 🤙🏻 una novela con mucho potencial espero más capítulos, lo recomiendo
imma stack the chapter before reading. good luck tho and i hope this is as good as your other projects
I'm not exactly familiar on how biology works in One Piece. But I do know people can grow up to be very tall. Will this be the case for the Uchiha? Will they affected the longer they live there?