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the story is pretty good. the only complaints that I have is the lack of consistency in power levels of the mc. at one time he is peak jonin, in the next, he is getting dogged by a counterpart at the same rank. the writing quality is very good with no mistakes. The story is developing quite well. it lacks depth in certain areas, but overall entertaining enough to be called a worthwhile read. characters are multi dimensional. not like the typical chinese bs. i suppose the translator is heavily editing it. The world background is limited at the moment but we are only at 35 chapters. so there is plenty of time.
Hasta el momento va bien, esperemos como evoluciona la trama, buen trabajo, buen trabajo.... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=proud][img=proud][img=strong][img=strong]
The story is quite good, it is quite pleasant to read each chapter, although it has a system that does not make it extremely powerful from one moment to the next. the translator does a great job, keep it up my friend
the story is pretty good. the only complaints that I have is the lack of consistency in power levels of the mc. at one time he is peak jonin, in the next, he is getting dogged by a counterpart at the same rank. the writing quality is very good with no mistakes. The story is developing quite well. it lacks depth in certain areas, but overall entertaining enough to be called a worthwhile read. characters are multi dimensional. not like the typical chinese bs. i suppose the translator is heavily editing it. The world background is limited at the moment but we are only at 35 chapters. so there is plenty of time.
Hasta el momento va bien, esperemos como evoluciona la trama, buen trabajo, buen trabajo.... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=proud][img=proud][img=strong][img=strong]
The story is quite good, it is quite pleasant to read each chapter, although it has a system that does not make it extremely powerful from one moment to the next. the translator does a great job, keep it up my friend