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Thanks for the good story, i really love the creative concept behind it but your writing quality does not do justice to this good novel, sometimes you misplaced the genders of the characters and the story development and world background is lacking, if you could describe both worlds backgrounds it would be really helpful, please keep up the good work even if you don't improve I'll still continue to read.
Thanks for the good story, i really love the creative concept behind it but your writing quality does not do justice to this good novel, sometimes you misplaced the genders of the characters and the story development and world background is lacking, if you could describe both worlds backgrounds it would be really helpful, please keep up the good work even if you don't improve I'll still continue to read.