Pokémon: Starting with a Bound Entry System

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MarinXGrayfia

can you just not mix the real world with Pokemon especially china. and the move please use the correct one🙄. hard to find a good Pokemon novel and it's ez ruin it

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AlastorGF

Un romance con un OC este fanfic es basura entonces, tantos personajes femeninos en Pokémon y mandan un OC asco me dan estos fanfic es como los que usan OC en fairy Tail como si no hubiera demasiados personajes femeninos para elegir

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Asura69s

Hm hm it's worth the time I spend reading it and it's quite op just don't change the name too often and it is one of the best pokemon fan fic

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Javier_Graneros

Antes del capítulo 29 fue perfecto, me gustó mucho, pero luego de este capítulo hubo cosas que me incomodaron, el cambio a último momento no me agradó, recién me estaba acostumbrado a las características de este mundo y el que hagan cambios de forma muy repentina me confunde, algunas cosas se dejaron de lado sin explicación y la traducción de las nuevas clasificaciones de Pokémon no estuvo bien hecha, se usa la palabra maestro dos veces, la palabra Overlord me pareció más apropiado para otro tipo de historia y el título Rey Celestial no me gusta, me hace pensar cosas extrañas como: ¿Estos Pokémon gobiernan algo?¿Pueden volar?¿Controlan el cielo? xD jaja

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GOL_D_ROGUER

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Morpheus_45368

one of the best pokemon works.maintain this quality and keep going

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Santy_Melay

The novel is garbage, or rather, the translation is garbage, because you change the name of the protagonist and the female OC but not the others, are you subnormal or what? Wang Yao, Mrs. Qin, the Gym leader who appears in the first chapters, whose name I don't remember, it's absurd that you don't change them too, it breaks all the immersion.

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Sage_Hussein

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Geno_hunter

it has its downs, but overall, I'm enjoying the novel so far

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Sage_Ravan_7

Writing Quality 1/5 : Lot of translation errors World Background 1/5 : It's confusing as hell Remaining 5/5 Not bad but can be a lot better.

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AzureKingdom

It's Entertaining enough to not stop reading. 😊

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Storm1441

The translation is off in what seems like every other paragraph, and the fact that it’s in china takes away from the mystical world of Pokémon, also there’s a few things that clearly lead to something that important but have no explanation about where they came from. Besides these things the story has a very cool idea and is interesting

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Very fun read with consistent updates and good writing quality and characterization for each of his caught Pokemon. world building is good as well, although its not set in the pokemon world, it still feels like it; with secret realms which is essentially danger rated pokemon wild zones, and plenty of battles and tournaments plus it still has gym battles so its essentially the same thing if you ask me.

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TiuLuh

bemplor uala conxentaçio em g/ de uma soluçio de 70 g de cdoreto de sódio dsolidosem 350ml de soluço? bemplor uala conxentaçio em g/ de uma soluçio de 70 g de cdoreto de sódio dsolidosem 350ml de soluço?