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The novel is well written and has a good storyline. Several pokemon ffs that involve team rocket delve into the dark aspects of team rocket and other organizations, but this is one of the more well written ones. The mc isn’t broken right out of the gate and has a system and has to work hard to produce results. The only plot hole i can think of would be the making of pokeblocks, but it is explained that the system helps him. The story moves at a pretty slow pace, but the build up is good so far and he doesn’t just time skip his early stages phase of training. Would recommend.
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after 254 chapters he is still a team rocket grunt by chapter 1000 he will barely be a captain let alone a quasi elite which means it will take like 3 years until progress occurs no offense author its just wayyyy tooooo slowwwwwwwwww
A good Fic, so far I like it. The translation is also quite good. And the update is fast.
itss reeeeaaaaaallllyyyy ggooooood! thank you for translating this story, I really depend on people like you. you do an awesome job :)!
It's boring.. It's not bad overall but I just found the plot predictable and lackluster.. Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate
The best Pokémon fanfic I’ve read in a while I hope they don’t abandon the story like jeezu did. ………….. ……………………… …………….,,.,…………. …………. ……………………………….. ………………
This is sooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.
A very good light novel so far and the translation done is very good. I look forward to reading what happens next.
a very good fanfic even though it's a translation, keep up the good work, i hope to read more of it.
Awesome fanfic looking for more of them I need some fanfic with potential and not kid friendly.
I love this fanfic unfortunately it's has always been let down with it's poor translation so I'm so happy to finally have someone translating it to the quality it deserves.
The novel is well written and has a good storyline. Several pokemon ffs that involve team rocket delve into the dark aspects of team rocket and other organizations, but this is one of the more well written ones. The mc isn’t broken right out of the gate and has a system and has to work hard to produce results. The only plot hole i can think of would be the making of pokeblocks, but it is explained that the system helps him. The story moves at a pretty slow pace, but the build up is good so far and he doesn’t just time skip his early stages phase of training. Would recommend.
anyone has the raw ???------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------anyone has the raw ???anyone has the raw ???anyone has the raw ???
after 254 chapters he is still a team rocket grunt by chapter 1000 he will barely be a captain let alone a quasi elite which means it will take like 3 years until progress occurs no offense author its just wayyyy tooooo slowwwwwwwwww
A good Fic, so far I like it. The translation is also quite good. And the update is fast.
itss reeeeaaaaaallllyyyy ggooooood! thank you for translating this story, I really depend on people like you. you do an awesome job :)!
It's boring.. It's not bad overall but I just found the plot predictable and lackluster.. Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate
The best Pokémon fanfic I’ve read in a while I hope they don’t abandon the story like jeezu did. ………….. ……………………… …………….,,.,…………. …………. ……………………………….. ………………
This is sooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.
A very good light novel so far and the translation done is very good. I look forward to reading what happens next.
a very good fanfic even though it's a translation, keep up the good work, i hope to read more of it.
Awesome fanfic looking for more of them I need some fanfic with potential and not kid friendly.
I love this fanfic unfortunately it's has always been let down with it's poor translation so I'm so happy to finally have someone translating it to the quality it deserves.
This is stolen from another dropped fic here even the mc name is the same