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I love the story. it just needs to work on emotional state of the characters between the FL and ML more. but it is very good and keep up the good work Author and never give up
I absolutely love the story. The only thing that I don't like is that you keep changing the POV in every chapter, and it keeps throwing me off with the narrative, but overall, I enjoy this kind of novel, and I hope you won't drop it like a lot of authors do!!!
Such a unique concept. It's kinda an isekai version of Age of Empires. I enjoyed it, especially the battle scenes. However, Alberto and the other characters at early chapters are kinda... bland. Though I took a sneak peek at the latest chapter and I saw a lot of character development from him. Overall, this book has a potential to become a great book.
I must say, I love how the story with the war and everything. I didn't even expect how his reincarnation was. Very original in fact. Keep the good work, Author
Okay so honest opinion? This book is controversial explaining how some nationalities are beaten and all that, even if its fiction in the latest chap. This feels more like a way to send some sort of message to them, and the story... hmm.. its pretty normal for my taste. System used and world little by little beating them up. The thing doesnt add anything new, or a spice, the story for me. In my most critical view. Is kind of bland, I think it needs more chapters to make it pay off or a better hook and make things make more stakes for the mc
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The writing quality wavers between really good and some questionable, immersion breaking typos and random capitalization and strange moments in dialogue Overall the novel is good, not my favorite type of novel, but for its genre, it is definitely a gem Give it a try!
A good story so far. The plot is the usual reincarnation/isekai kingdom-building one, but with an unusual mc; i.e. one that is not from the 21st century. This makes it fun to read compared to other generic novels, which is what I like about this story... it has a good hook to it so to speak. The new world is described well, and side characters are given enough time, which is always a plus. Keep up the great work!
The story is very interesting! I love the world-building and the sci-fi elements. I can picture every detail as I read!
I think this is the most I have read of an WWII novel that didn't make my head spin. THAT IS A COMPLIMENT!! I like world-building very immaculate. As for the ending where Admiral Akari encountered the sea serpent to Captain Marko witnessed the giant clam saying it want to come in peace! Are they aliens?!
Wow, nice start. I like the depth of explanation, I'm able to picture the scenes perfectly, the writer Is good at explaining the situations perfectly. Waiting for the next chapter.
This novel literally took me back in time. Nice world, a really impressing sc Fi, almost like fantasy. Good job. Keep up the good work author
The plot had me hooked from the first chapter, interesting characters so far and the pace is going just fine. I look forward to seeing how it turns out.
From where I am, everything is good. I like Alberto as a character and has room for further growth. I still find problems with the world building, mostly the magic system.
Nice story, a good plot, and well-written. I love it and I recommend it to everyone.
Intense atmosphere, great interaction btw character, nice world building and very interesting plot...Anyone If your are a worldbuilding fan like me definitely give it a try...
This is a great story. Quite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed. Plus, the writing style is quite simple and goes in a good flow. Great book and will surely enjoy it
i love these kind of stories. keep up the good work :) i will keep reading it and supporting you , author. more give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I love the story. it just needs to work on emotional state of the characters between the FL and ML more. but it is very good and keep up the good work Author and never give up
I absolutely love the story. The only thing that I don't like is that you keep changing the POV in every chapter, and it keeps throwing me off with the narrative, but overall, I enjoy this kind of novel, and I hope you won't drop it like a lot of authors do!!!
Such a unique concept. It's kinda an isekai version of Age of Empires. I enjoyed it, especially the battle scenes. However, Alberto and the other characters at early chapters are kinda... bland. Though I took a sneak peek at the latest chapter and I saw a lot of character development from him. Overall, this book has a potential to become a great book.
I must say, I love how the story with the war and everything. I didn't even expect how his reincarnation was. Very original in fact. Keep the good work, Author
Okay so honest opinion? This book is controversial explaining how some nationalities are beaten and all that, even if its fiction in the latest chap. This feels more like a way to send some sort of message to them, and the story... hmm.. its pretty normal for my taste. System used and world little by little beating them up. The thing doesnt add anything new, or a spice, the story for me. In my most critical view. Is kind of bland, I think it needs more chapters to make it pay off or a better hook and make things make more stakes for the mc
揭示劇透 The writing quality wavers between really good and some questionable, immersion breaking typos and random capitalization and strange moments in dialogue Overall the novel is good, not my favorite type of novel, but for its genre, it is definitely a gem Give it a try!
A good story so far. The plot is the usual reincarnation/isekai kingdom-building one, but with an unusual mc; i.e. one that is not from the 21st century. This makes it fun to read compared to other generic novels, which is what I like about this story... it has a good hook to it so to speak. The new world is described well, and side characters are given enough time, which is always a plus. Keep up the great work!
The story is very interesting! I love the world-building and the sci-fi elements. I can picture every detail as I read!
I think this is the most I have read of an WWII novel that didn't make my head spin. THAT IS A COMPLIMENT!! I like world-building very immaculate. As for the ending where Admiral Akari encountered the sea serpent to Captain Marko witnessed the giant clam saying it want to come in peace! Are they aliens?!
Wow, nice start. I like the depth of explanation, I'm able to picture the scenes perfectly, the writer Is good at explaining the situations perfectly. Waiting for the next chapter.
This novel literally took me back in time. Nice world, a really impressing sc Fi, almost like fantasy. Good job. Keep up the good work author
The plot had me hooked from the first chapter, interesting characters so far and the pace is going just fine. I look forward to seeing how it turns out.
From where I am, everything is good. I like Alberto as a character and has room for further growth. I still find problems with the world building, mostly the magic system.
Nice story, a good plot, and well-written. I love it and I recommend it to everyone.
Intense atmosphere, great interaction btw character, nice world building and very interesting plot...Anyone If your are a worldbuilding fan like me definitely give it a try...
This is a great story. Quite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed. Plus, the writing style is quite simple and goes in a good flow. Great book and will surely enjoy it
i love these kind of stories. keep up the good work :) i will keep reading it and supporting you , author. more give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee