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Child of Fate: The Enforcer

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From the beginning of time, the two clans, Deva clan and Asura clan waged war against each other, where Deva's claimed to be on the righteous side whereas the Asuras were deemed to be evil as they committed atrocious acts of butchering innocent lives, meddling in the auspicious events of sages, etc., and staking claim on the throne of Deva Lok. The war has destroyed lives and various Lok's, in the end the three Supreme Gods (God Brahma the Creator, God Vishnu the Preserver and God of Gods who is also known as the Mahadev or God Shiv the Destroyer) had to intervene to stop the senseless war providing the much-needed relief to the common populace of God Realm.

All the Deva Clan Members along with Devaraj Indra to the Tridev: "Namostu te Vedagarbha, Sarvavidya Pradayaka" (Salutations to the one who holds the Vedas and grants all knowledge), "Om Namo Narayanaya" (Salutations to Lord Narayana), "Om Namah Shivaya" (Salutations to Shiva, the auspicious one).

While the Asuras in the leadership of their leader and Guru, Guru Shukracharya performed Shastanga Namaskara as they did worship God Brahma but for the boons he will give and the Asuras had a particular dislike for God Vishnu as he favors the cosmic balance and is on the righteous side i.e., Devas side but they still showed the much needed respect for one of the supreme beings and Asuras were devoted believer of Mahadev as he is the only one impartial among the three supreme gods.

God Vishnu said "Devaraj Indra why must you continue this senseless war with the Asuras? You are King of Gods, King of Swarg Lok then what more do you need from the Asuras when they are confined to their Paataal Lok."

Devaraj Indra said with respect "Lord Vishnu it was them who were creating chaos among the sages intervening in the sage's meditation and destroying livestock, so I had to confront them."

Hearing Devaraj Indra slandering the Asuras in front of the Three Supreme Gods while not mentioning the mistreatment of Asuras done by Devas, the Asura Guru Shukracharya too said " Mahadev you have to uphold justice for the Asuras, we were just banished to the Paataal Lok from the beginning while the Devas got to rule the Swarg Lok. Why can't we Asuras get the same treatment as they do? And this war was started by the Asuras and Devas jointly but only we are blamed here."

Hearing the Asura Guru Shukracharya, the Three Supreme Gods were too taken back as they too were not able to judge them with full impartiality so, Mahadev decided on a solution and solemnly announced among the Asuras and Devas "Very soon we Three Supreme Gods will bring into being a new force which will be born far away from here among the humans and his very journey will shape him to be the bearer of justice for all of the creation. He will be the embodiment of impartial justice whether to the Asuras or Devas for he will judge the being on the basis of his karma so I will warn all of you now that you should be careful of what karma you sow as you will soon be dealt with your karmafal."

And so, the war of Asuras and Devas came to a pause.

This is the story of a boy whose destiny was written before he was born, his very being was conceptualized but the Supreme Gods as he was born with the fraction of the three Supreme Gods.

**It's my second novel as the first one is on pause as I am out of further plot for that one but this will be a blast because it is based on my cultural myth but there will be some changes so you can say it's my original work just taken some inspiration from the myths so whoever is reading and if he knows about the original history then don't criticize me for making the changes as I am writing a novel and I, in my full conscience am very respectful of the Gods and our culture.**

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Devil_S_8367

I just finished reading the first 20 chapters, and wow, this story has me completely hooked! The world-building is phenomenal, with every detail pulling me deeper into the plot. The characters are so well-developed that I feel like I know them personally. The protagonist’s journey is especially compelling, and I can’t wait to see how they grow and overcome the challenges ahead.

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Devil_S_8367

What to say writer I'm impressed with your dedication on uploading the chapters regularly and making the plot engaging and hooking. Keep it up.

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Devil_S_8367

Your writing quality has improved but not much as it was good from the start and the updates are regular from the start the story development is pretty good and looking impressive, hooking storyline. Character design is good so far as it is work in progress and last but not least the world background is still pretty much same as ours but not quite the same so I'm hoping that the world background or at least the world around the mc is explained in the coming chapters. overall its a good novel.

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Devil_S_8367

What to say author its good, too good whole day I wait for the new chapter like a diehard fan. everyone please give this novel a read its good

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Devil_S_8367

I enjoyed the latest chapter very much and thanks for the mass release author keep up the good work. Brilliant plot, good quality writing, and I like how you brought the Hindu culture about the devas and asuras and their realms in this novel and am waiting for them to make their appearance, but I know it will not happen so soon.

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Devil_S_8367

I am having fun reading it and rooting for the mass release of tonight keep up the good work writer and i want the story to pick the pace a little

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Devil_S_8367

Very interesting and entertaining chapter Keep it up author and I am rooting up for the upcoming chapters and I kind of liked the backstory monologue

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Devil_S_8367

fantastic chapter and i had much fun reading it hope this continues and rooting for the upcoming chapters. anyone who sees this review I sincerely, kindly and forcefully [img=recommend] suggest this novel for all of you to read and add it in your library

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Devil_S_8367

What can I say it's getting good and building up the plot soon and I kind of think that its plot will be somewhat similar, but I hope it's not.

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Devil_S_8367

what can I say? As I somewhat know the lore but still, I want to see this story pick up the pace soon. I suggest for all the audience to give it a read.

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Devil_S_8367

Writing quality is good and easily understandable, story development is good and so far the character is looking promising and world background has not been mentioned much yet hope its also good and i suggest everyone whether a kid or elder or young give it a read as its looking good so far if you don't mind it having only 1 chapter

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