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although the plot is quite simple, it's good overall. the ending is also satisfactory enough.
At the beginning the flow of the story was a littke hectic and there were scenes that never were explained further ahead, like the boy kissing Helek when they arrive at the first house and then they have to run again. Everything happenning in 1 month is very difficult to understand, it felt like a year or so to explain the kind of degeneration humanity went through. But then the narrative gets better and the sequence of the facts become more logic. I liked that it had a happy ending
this story is very good and different i really like it please author update more
This story definitely has a captivating presence and much potential! I ’m rooting for this author, as they have really fun and creative ideas, and I can’t wait to see how this story will flourish! Bravo author and all the best!
okay so i am rating this book 5 stars cuz i think my book is perfect. i wrote what I wanted to read as a reader......... I am sure you will also enjoy my story.... I am giving a review now cuz 50 chapters have been updated today. it's half a century and I am happy. ... if you have any questions join the discord server
although the plot is quite simple, it's good overall. the ending is also satisfactory enough.
At the beginning the flow of the story was a littke hectic and there were scenes that never were explained further ahead, like the boy kissing Helek when they arrive at the first house and then they have to run again. Everything happenning in 1 month is very difficult to understand, it felt like a year or so to explain the kind of degeneration humanity went through. But then the narrative gets better and the sequence of the facts become more logic. I liked that it had a happy ending
this story is very good and different i really like it please author update more
This story definitely has a captivating presence and much potential! I ’m rooting for this author, as they have really fun and creative ideas, and I can’t wait to see how this story will flourish! Bravo author and all the best!
okay so i am rating this book 5 stars cuz i think my book is perfect. i wrote what I wanted to read as a reader......... I am sure you will also enjoy my story.... I am giving a review now cuz 50 chapters have been updated today. it's half a century and I am happy. ... if you have any questions join the discord server