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寫檢討At the beginning the flow of the story was a littke hectic and there were scenes that never were explained further ahead, like the boy kissing Helek when they arrive at the first house and then they have to run again. Everything happenning in 1 month is very difficult to understand, it felt like a year or so to explain the kind of degeneration humanity went through. But then the narrative gets better and the sequence of the facts become more logic. I liked that it had a happy ending
okay so i am rating this book 5 stars cuz i think my book is perfect. i wrote what I wanted to read as a reader......... I am sure you will also enjoy my story.... I am giving a review now cuz 50 chapters have been updated today. it's half a century and I am happy. ... if you have any questions join the discord server
At the beginning the flow of the story was a littke hectic and there were scenes that never were explained further ahead, like the boy kissing Helek when they arrive at the first house and then they have to run again. Everything happenning in 1 month is very difficult to understand, it felt like a year or so to explain the kind of degeneration humanity went through. But then the narrative gets better and the sequence of the facts become more logic. I liked that it had a happy ending
okay so i am rating this book 5 stars cuz i think my book is perfect. i wrote what I wanted to read as a reader......... I am sure you will also enjoy my story.... I am giving a review now cuz 50 chapters have been updated today. it's half a century and I am happy. ... if you have any questions join the discord server