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Born as an orphan in the same class as Obito. Haori becomes a mysterious nin and the disciple of Kushina. The writing style is very pleasing to the ears. In world now dominated by AI, I can't express enough how I hate common AI phrases. As a fan fiction, It has the makings of a great one. It's not a recap canon and the characters feel familiar.
What are the A-rank skill and S- rank talent? On which chapters is it explained? ................................................................
thanks for the translation keep up the great work looking forward for your next chapters 😊
If You Like Interesting Story To Keep You Away From Being Bored, The This Is One's Interest Shit & The Author/Translator Responsibility To Complete This Grand Shit. 😎👍
easy 5 star because it caught my interest and how to understand Science (Ignore this shit: woman at the same time)
Could you reply it's Chinese fanfic name.cause it's really nice novel and I feel like I have read it but can't remember it...................................................................
Shixie here, you're free to read my shitty translation, drop a review and comment if you like it
this review is written after reading to chapter 54. Overall and quick? worth a try. give it a try and see if u like it. the story is alright and interesting enough as well as the translation. Now i was expecting more science and stuff so, hold back your expectations qhen you go in with accurate science representation in mind. The applications are there, but no explicit mentioned reasoning in most cases are the process of getting there. Overall, a good read
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Raw link please .................................................................................. .................................................................................
Born as an orphan in the same class as Obito. Haori becomes a mysterious nin and the disciple of Kushina. The writing style is very pleasing to the ears. In world now dominated by AI, I can't express enough how I hate common AI phrases. As a fan fiction, It has the makings of a great one. It's not a recap canon and the characters feel familiar.
What are the A-rank skill and S- rank talent? On which chapters is it explained? ................................................................
thanks for the translation keep up the great work looking forward for your next chapters 😊
If You Like Interesting Story To Keep You Away From Being Bored, The This Is One's Interest Shit & The Author/Translator Responsibility To Complete This Grand Shit. 😎👍
easy 5 star because it caught my interest and how to understand Science (Ignore this shit: woman at the same time)
Could you reply it's Chinese fanfic name.cause it's really nice novel and I feel like I have read it but can't remember it...................................................................
Shixie here, you're free to read my shitty translation, drop a review and comment if you like it
this review is written after reading to chapter 54. Overall and quick? worth a try. give it a try and see if u like it. the story is alright and interesting enough as well as the translation. Now i was expecting more science and stuff so, hold back your expectations qhen you go in with accurate science representation in mind. The applications are there, but no explicit mentioned reasoning in most cases are the process of getting there. Overall, a good read