Shadow Slave: Bloodborne

LV 1

Atlas_77

Pretty good although it has some flaws in the start and some grammatic errors it's pretty decent, if you're considering whether to read or not, you should just try reading it

LV 1

Wesley_Celular

Boring----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 3

Atty_Justin

I like the concept I'd say add a picture to your book that will attract more readers a blank one doesn't, like i read 3 fanfics before i got to yours, and I only read yours because i was trying to get a feel of Shadow Slave fanfics, though to my suprise yours had way more than most do, and everything your doing seems solid while minus the 2 Divine Aspects but since the story is yours it's ok.