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i like the story but i almost decided not to read it when i saew the synopsis its got things in it that dont follow or make sense according to the naruto franchise
I really liked it, to be honest, the author wrote the main character very well, I have read a lot of fanfics but this one is different, I hope there will be more chapters, the author will write it.
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I liked it and a translation? I would like to know its original name? Jdhdudnsjddudndinsismsixmdidnidudidjdidmskemixndkdixjdnximdisnxuejusndudhhdniwnwowmdyrn ufnowndjdjdjd dud dhd dhndhd dud dh djdnxjd xhdbuddnid euxndidndid djdkdfiejgg chxhxkgdjgditzjvxkvxkgxhk
Good potential, I like cats so it's perfect for me. I hope you will continue.
Story is amazing but I cant figure out if the mc's name is Toneri or Tonari as it keep switching back and forth [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
i like the story but i almost decided not to read it when i saew the synopsis its got things in it that dont follow or make sense according to the naruto franchise
I really liked it, to be honest, the author wrote the main character very well, I have read a lot of fanfics but this one is different, I hope there will be more chapters, the author will write it.
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I liked it and a translation? I would like to know its original name? Jdhdudnsjddudndinsismsixmdidnidudidjdidmskemixndkdixjdnximdisnxuejusndudhhdniwnwowmdyrn ufnowndjdjdjd dud dhd dhndhd dud dh djdnxjd xhdbuddnid euxndidndid djdkdfiejgg chxhxkgdjgditzjvxkvxkgxhk
Good potential, I like cats so it's perfect for me. I hope you will continue.
Story is amazing but I cant figure out if the mc's name is Toneri or Tonari as it keep switching back and forth [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]