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I like this story and I hope the author continues it. Because it's not every day that you find a story where such universes are combined together.
Yeah, this is just another shameless review—nothing new. I'm simply continuing the tradition.
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I hopes the author gets to be famous for this book. At least 400 chapters (Don't pay attention to this) Ndjjdjskxsksnzknjnsjwjsjsnjzsnqzksnqzjskokska
gostei muito da ideia para a fanfic como tem poucos capítulos eu não tenho como avaliar melhor, espero que as atualização seja mais rápidas e que não fique em hiatos.
This is a hidden masterpiece! I hope author can atleast write until the end of bell break mc curse.i hope you won't drop like other novels. Most of ur novels are really good
The premise is fresh, but the execution could be better. I definitely did not like the existence of devour, it's an easy cop out to everything. I was looking forward to a story that relies on interactions and how to break the curse, but with devour, I fear that this would be another "I'm gonna beat all the enemies and devour their abilities" kind of fic.
It's hard to find stories with interesting and original ideas, so give it a chance just for that. For now, everything is going well in the story for me, from the protagonist, to his interesting abilities, to his even more interesting identity. Recommended.
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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A truly excellent start, I’d say. The introduction of Coco World at the beginning of the MC’s journey was a particularly clever decision. I hope you'll take some creative liberties with the crossover, rather than sticking too closely to the original storylines. Can't wait to see where this goes! Best of luck to the author, and I sincerely hope you complete this novel.
word count chapter in ch7. come on man. this was good. unfortunately, just had to ruin it
thx for the response I couldn't see the reply on the review but saw it on your profile. love the story once again and keep up the good work. the story has a lot of potential and I would like to see more, can't wait.😁 and sorry for calling you out like that😅 you just wanted the exposure and opportunity for more ppl to see you story. so I will now give five star. ps I would love the word count chapter to an auxiliary or just before the prologue when i got to the word count chapter it kinda killed my enthusiasm to read more and that's why I made my original review so idk if other readers have that feeling but you do you. thx one again
There are useless chapters when the mc moves between worlds, just as the mc himself chose the curse and the disease lycanthropy for some reason, and no these curses did not make him a super imboy, he could have become one anyway, given that he has the ability to "devour", perhaps this is some kind of fetish of the author or he wanted a rich mc, but this makes no sense, because there are more problems than benefits, there are also a lot of Mary Sue, mc can turn into a human thanks to the ability of a werewolf? of course, that's exactly how it works. Also, despite the fact that mc has ice magic, nightmare sand and a magic staff, he does not use them at all. Also, when mc met a sorceress who cursed him, instead of tearing her up on the spot and devouring her, he behaves like a virgin for the first time and is afraid of something incomprehensible, although he himself chose to be cursed. The author also made the number of words, and for this it is necessary to punish.
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Feels a little rough, but I'm looking forward to reading this when there are more chs
Algo completamente nuevo e interesante de leer, no es exelente pero la premisa es atracción. Leeré hasta donde llegue el autor con esto........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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ok this is the first time I read Disney fanfic and am looking forward to more i wonder if this will be a Disney multiverse :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
I hope you keep it going to the end. It's been great so far [img=recommend][img=update]
I like this story and I hope the author continues it. Because it's not every day that you find a story where such universes are combined together.
Yeah, this is just another shameless review—nothing new. I'm simply continuing the tradition.
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I hopes the author gets to be famous for this book. At least 400 chapters (Don't pay attention to this) Ndjjdjskxsksnzknjnsjwjsjsnjzsnqzksnqzjskokska
gostei muito da ideia para a fanfic como tem poucos capítulos eu não tenho como avaliar melhor, espero que as atualização seja mais rápidas e que não fique em hiatos.
This is a hidden masterpiece! I hope author can atleast write until the end of bell break mc curse.i hope you won't drop like other novels. Most of ur novels are really good
The premise is fresh, but the execution could be better. I definitely did not like the existence of devour, it's an easy cop out to everything. I was looking forward to a story that relies on interactions and how to break the curse, but with devour, I fear that this would be another "I'm gonna beat all the enemies and devour their abilities" kind of fic.
It's hard to find stories with interesting and original ideas, so give it a chance just for that. For now, everything is going well in the story for me, from the protagonist, to his interesting abilities, to his even more interesting identity. Recommended.
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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A truly excellent start, I’d say. The introduction of Coco World at the beginning of the MC’s journey was a particularly clever decision. I hope you'll take some creative liberties with the crossover, rather than sticking too closely to the original storylines. Can't wait to see where this goes! Best of luck to the author, and I sincerely hope you complete this novel.
word count chapter in ch7. come on man. this was good. unfortunately, just had to ruin it
thx for the response I couldn't see the reply on the review but saw it on your profile. love the story once again and keep up the good work. the story has a lot of potential and I would like to see more, can't wait.😁 and sorry for calling you out like that😅 you just wanted the exposure and opportunity for more ppl to see you story. so I will now give five star. ps I would love the word count chapter to an auxiliary or just before the prologue when i got to the word count chapter it kinda killed my enthusiasm to read more and that's why I made my original review so idk if other readers have that feeling but you do you. thx one again
There are useless chapters when the mc moves between worlds, just as the mc himself chose the curse and the disease lycanthropy for some reason, and no these curses did not make him a super imboy, he could have become one anyway, given that he has the ability to "devour", perhaps this is some kind of fetish of the author or he wanted a rich mc, but this makes no sense, because there are more problems than benefits, there are also a lot of Mary Sue, mc can turn into a human thanks to the ability of a werewolf? of course, that's exactly how it works. Also, despite the fact that mc has ice magic, nightmare sand and a magic staff, he does not use them at all. Also, when mc met a sorceress who cursed him, instead of tearing her up on the spot and devouring her, he behaves like a virgin for the first time and is afraid of something incomprehensible, although he himself chose to be cursed. The author also made the number of words, and for this it is necessary to punish.
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Feels a little rough, but I'm looking forward to reading this when there are more chs
Algo completamente nuevo e interesante de leer, no es exelente pero la premisa es atracción. Leeré hasta donde llegue el autor con esto........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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ok this is the first time I read Disney fanfic and am looking forward to more i wonder if this will be a Disney multiverse :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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