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- 人物形象設計
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LV 14 ![Badge]()
please change the title it harem and that literally contradicts the title change it to I have many girlfriends or someshit
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The story is good and the idea is refreshing, but unfortunately the translator is too lazy to edit it. There is Chinese nationalism as usual, frankly I am tired of it. But I want to understand one thing, if you don't want to take the responsibility of being Spider-Man, why are you aiming for his power? I mean Spider-Man isn't Spider-Man if he doesn't take responsibility for fighting crime and that's the real Spider-Man.
LV 14 ![Badge]()
please change the title it harem and that literally contradicts the title change it to I have many girlfriends or someshit
The story is good and the idea is refreshing, but unfortunately the translator is too lazy to edit it. There is Chinese nationalism as usual, frankly I am tired of it. But I want to understand one thing, if you don't want to take the responsibility of being Spider-Man, why are you aiming for his power? I mean Spider-Man isn't Spider-Man if he doesn't take responsibility for fighting crime and that's the real Spider-Man.