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Lemme be honest bro, your translation skills are impeccable, it’s just that the og novel is so shit that it doesn make up for it. If I was you I’d stop wasting time on this dumpster fire and translate a good story (Preferably Naruto) where your translation skills can really shine
The name of the original is "In konoha this Naruto has decided to take it easy" it currently has 200+chapters and I didn't like the story much cause the mc has no ambition at all and is heavily rely on the system so the only thing good about this from the orignal is the translation is better here so if you want more chapter look for the orignal
Interesting concept, the translation needs improvement here and there however but its definitely a interesting story. Keep up the good work author, i can tell you've got passion.
First of all this novel has already been posted on here, but this translation is so much better that it's not even in the same ballpark. Props to the translator for that. Now I'll say what I said in my review of the last one. I have always been wary of any mtl where the system involves 'lying flat' or 'salted fish' because in every single one of those novels, you end up with an Mc that has no ambitions, no work ethic, no goals and puts no effort into anything. Basically they just do nothing in particular and the benefits passively roll in via the system. I have read about 50 chapters of the mtl and I can clearly tell you that this novel is the same. He basically just lazes around all the time and does nothing. He doesn't have any real goals, he doesn't train, he doesn't put any effort into anything at all. It was ridiculously boring and very difficult to make it through 50 chapters of him laying around, flirting with women(children) and airing his woes to the world while power that he didn't earn and doesn't know how to use passively rolls in from the system. With no goals you have no story, with no effort you have even less of a story. However again, I have to give kudos to the translator. I didn't even recognize this story as the same one I read until a couple chapters in. Infinitely better. Just the choice of story that you've put so much effort into is unappealing for me.
I find this transaction much better than the other one, and it's worth the wait
First I was gonna leave a review on how there was already a translated version of this out there but this is much better and what it deserves good job.
this fanfic is already publishing by name konoha: this Naruto decided to take it easy it's already posted 140 chapters on daily basis 😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨
Shameless review from me, but I had to note to people that the story is promising and takes a bit longer than expected to develop, however, It is super interesting and must read!!
Lemme be honest bro, your translation skills are impeccable, it’s just that the og novel is so shit that it doesn make up for it. If I was you I’d stop wasting time on this dumpster fire and translate a good story (Preferably Naruto) where your translation skills can really shine
The name of the original is "In konoha this Naruto has decided to take it easy" it currently has 200+chapters and I didn't like the story much cause the mc has no ambition at all and is heavily rely on the system so the only thing good about this from the orignal is the translation is better here so if you want more chapter look for the orignal
Interesting concept, the translation needs improvement here and there however but its definitely a interesting story. Keep up the good work author, i can tell you've got passion.
First of all this novel has already been posted on here, but this translation is so much better that it's not even in the same ballpark. Props to the translator for that. Now I'll say what I said in my review of the last one. I have always been wary of any mtl where the system involves 'lying flat' or 'salted fish' because in every single one of those novels, you end up with an Mc that has no ambitions, no work ethic, no goals and puts no effort into anything. Basically they just do nothing in particular and the benefits passively roll in via the system. I have read about 50 chapters of the mtl and I can clearly tell you that this novel is the same. He basically just lazes around all the time and does nothing. He doesn't have any real goals, he doesn't train, he doesn't put any effort into anything at all. It was ridiculously boring and very difficult to make it through 50 chapters of him laying around, flirting with women(children) and airing his woes to the world while power that he didn't earn and doesn't know how to use passively rolls in from the system. With no goals you have no story, with no effort you have even less of a story. However again, I have to give kudos to the translator. I didn't even recognize this story as the same one I read until a couple chapters in. Infinitely better. Just the choice of story that you've put so much effort into is unappealing for me.
I find this transaction much better than the other one, and it's worth the wait
First I was gonna leave a review on how there was already a translated version of this out there but this is much better and what it deserves good job.
this fanfic is already publishing by name konoha: this Naruto decided to take it easy it's already posted 140 chapters on daily basis 😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨
Shameless review from me, but I had to note to people that the story is promising and takes a bit longer than expected to develop, however, It is super interesting and must read!!