Reviews of Naruto: There is a big problem with my 'Love Life Choice' System! by TheBigFish - Webnovel

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Lema404
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Story reads like a mix between Naruto and a chinese cultivation story, but done poorly. "Naruto has never said that stupid chinese saying (courting death) ever, but for some reason, the author decided to use it."

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earth_19998

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UnbendingSteel

Not gonna lie, this is pretty hilarious if you ignore the grammatical mistakes. While it is sometimes hard(mtl) to read, the reader does get warned to turn off their brain. Just read it and decide for yourself. Keep going Author, cook!

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Herach

I like it! I'm a big fan of the "I just want to chill but my system won't let me" trope. It's a bit too much when he suddenly has a bunch of plans and a bunch of allies spread out. But at the same time, I quite like Karin's mother alive, so I'm happy. Overall It's a very interesting story, and while the translation has hiccups, it's still clearly good enough. Keep it up!

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All_Books_are_mine

Good piece of content!!. Funny but also serious about something. I just don't know if the author will start adding serious part like danzo movement behind the scenes or the consequences of the things did by the main character. It would be best if author just keep it funny and the story follow the original, or you can just destroy the canon and create your own. Doing first will be easier and more in line with the story. 👍👍👍👍😁😁👌👌👌👌 Good luck!! looking forward to more chapters.🧐🧐🫵✍️✍️🤝👍

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Lema404
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Story reads like a mix between Naruto and a chinese cultivation story, but done poorly. "Naruto has never said that stupid chinese saying (courting death) ever, but for some reason, the author decided to use it."

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earth_19998

Hello, I’m [Rishi Pandey], the owner of NOVELARC, and I’m excited to offer a fantastic opportunity for talented writers like you! We’d love for you to join our platform to publish your novel or fanfiction. As part of our program, we offer $3 per thousand views your chapters receive. Views are tracked and counted every Sunday or on the 1st day of each month, ensuring you receive accurate and timely payouts. To keep your readers engaged, we ask that you upload advance chapters of your work regularly. This will help build momentum and attract more views, ultimately maximizing your earnings. To help boost your success on NOVELARC, we recommend bringing your own readers to the platform. The more views your chapters generate, the higher your payout will be! If you're ready to join us on this exciting journey, we'd be happy to sign a contract to formalize the publishing rights for your novel or fanfiction. If you're interested in this opportunity, please feel free to reach out to me through: Instagram: [yurichi_adrenaline] Discord: [earth_19998] Alternatively, if you prefer another method of communication, just let me know and I’d be happy to reach out to you directly. Looking forward to working with passionate writers and bringing your stories to readers around the world! Best regards, [Rishi Pandey] NOVELARC

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UnbendingSteel

Not gonna lie, this is pretty hilarious if you ignore the grammatical mistakes. While it is sometimes hard(mtl) to read, the reader does get warned to turn off their brain. Just read it and decide for yourself. Keep going Author, cook!

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Herach

I like it! I'm a big fan of the "I just want to chill but my system won't let me" trope. It's a bit too much when he suddenly has a bunch of plans and a bunch of allies spread out. But at the same time, I quite like Karin's mother alive, so I'm happy. Overall It's a very interesting story, and while the translation has hiccups, it's still clearly good enough. Keep it up!

2mth
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All_Books_are_mine

Good piece of content!!. Funny but also serious about something. I just don't know if the author will start adding serious part like danzo movement behind the scenes or the consequences of the things did by the main character. It would be best if author just keep it funny and the story follow the original, or you can just destroy the canon and create your own. Doing first will be easier and more in line with the story. 👍👍👍👍😁😁👌👌👌👌 Good luck!! looking forward to more chapters.🧐🧐🫵✍️✍️🤝👍

3mth
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