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摘要
After an ordinary man from Earth meets an untimely death, he finds himself face-to-face with a god who grants him one final wish. Without hesitation, he wishes for the strength, skill, and tenacity of the legendary swordsman Roronoa Zoro from One Piece. His wish is granted, and he’s reborn in the world of Black Clover, as the best friend and trusted companion of Yami Sukehiro, captain of the Black Bulls.
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(The story begins at the Magic Knights Entrance Exam)
Author's Note:
Hey, everyone! So, here's the deal — I absolutely love Black Clover fanfics, but there just aren’t enough of them out there! Instead of waiting around for someone else to write my dream story, I figured, why not make it myself?
This fanfic is all about writing for fun, so expect a mix of action, humor, and hopefully some epic moments as I bring my favorite characters to life in new ways. I’m not aiming for perfection — I just want to enjoy the journey and share it with you all. Your feedback and ideas are super welcome, so if you have thoughts, suggestions, or just want to chat about the story, don't hesitate to leave a comment! I’d love to know what you think.
I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I’m enjoying writing it. Let’s dive into the world of Black Clover together, with a twist of Zoro-style swordsmanship thrown in for good measure!
Happy reading!
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Now that I've read all the chapters , i feel like now I can make a review . The Things that i didn't like : The mc itself at the beginning wasn't really mashing well together with the rest of the cast . Felt little bit forced at the beginning. Also if I'm not wrong , this isn't Zoro himself . Someone who was born as Zoro. It seems author tried to emulate Zoro's personality in the story which comes as a little bit off . Zoro in OP isn't really rude or dense . I would describe him as incredible blunt . This felt like mc doesn't have any original personality and it makes it little bit bland . Also , it feels incredibly fast paced The things i liked : Well , it gets immensely better in fighting department , especially the last arc of fighting in the capital . I would like more of it . Moreover, writing also good . I haven't notice any major grammar issues. Suggestions : You can incorporate mc's past , afterall, he's an reincarnated individual . He isn't really zoro. Try to slow the pace down . Add more interactions You're a good author . So keep it up .
Well the concept sounds interesting. Will give it a go. Hopefully you not drop it.
liked the concept, just didn't like how fast the story is going, there's barely any dialogue going on any chapters
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I like the concept, and so far the execution is good so I have high expectations from this fic
this is seems like its gonna be about moss head replacing the captain of the black bulls and just the same story as the original. how is he gonna have his own story? Everytime i see a black clover fanfic i see 0 original thought.
mc use a katana.........................................................................................................................................................
卷 1
- 1 The Magic Knight Entrance Exam 1 months ago
- 2 The Magic Knight Entrance Exam 2 1 months ago
- 3 The Black Bulls 1 months ago
- 4 Dorothy Unsworth 1 months ago
- 5 The Black Bulls 2 1 months ago
- 6 Dungeon 1 months ago
- 7 Dungeon 2 1 months ago
- 8 Dungeon 3 1 months ago
- 9 Dungeon End 1 months ago
- 10 Bonds Forged in Battle 1 months ago
- 11 The Ceremony 1 months ago
- 12 The Ceremony 2 1 months ago
- 13 The Attack on the Capital 1 months ago
- 14 The Attack on the Capital 2 1 months ago
- 15 The Attack on the Capital 3 1 months ago
- 16 The Attack on the Capital End 1 months ago
im only on chapter 3, but i just wanna say, at this point, why not just make MC Zoro himself? MC has a bad sense of direction like Zoro, and how he acts is like Zoro, what the point of have someone from earth then? i could be wrong since like only on chapter 3