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From the screen to the blade, to the grave, then the book Guess my plans weren’t as solid as they looked Always schemin’, but my group stabbed in the back Thought I was ruthless, turns out I was cooked See, I believed if I climbed up to the peak I'd own it all, but betrayal cut me deep Yeah, I killed the traitor, but karma wasn’t cheap Now I’m six feet under, and I can’t even sleep Woah-oh-oh This is how the story begins Woah-oh-oh Guess my life needed some high stakes Reborn now in some fantasy plot that my gf read The same old goal, but with waifus I forgot I sought Beast girls , a system that's hot And a goddess with secrets, I can't smash Woah-oh-oh This is how my harem grows Woah-oh-oh Guess this is how I tame beasts From "kill or be killed" to "pet or hug" These overpowered bunnies got me questioning the end But I’ll rise to the top—yeah, again and again ‘Cause in this wacky world, *I’m the kingpin, my friend!* Woah-oh-oh Plot twists keep coming, who even knows Woah-oh-oh Guess this is how the story goes!
This story hits all the best points! I generally HATE romance plots but the twist on this one is absolutely brilliant so far and not forced in the least. The mc is op without being overly arrogant or stupid af (so far). The story sucks you in right from the first paragraph and never lets go. The writing is fluid and engaging, full of comic relief without getting dopey. Looking forward to more chapters. The world building was detailed and graphic without getting boring or repetitive. I’m in love so far 💜. Keep up the great work!
This is a very unusual novel. Nothing much seems to happen, but the story moves forward. The way the System is presented and how the MC interacts with it (her) is truly unique. The MC is powerful but we don't know to what extent. He trains, but we don't see it. Some battles occur, but we don't see them. Some difficulties arise, but they are solved in the background, without the reader knowing how. In a way, the title is somewhat misguiding and the story is moving towards a slice of life. It's soon to tell if it will remain like that or if it is just a preparation for what is coming.
extremely well written and great. that's all I can think of. characters have very distinct personality and dialogues floe naturally and not to mention it's very well written too.
i hate zahara's character the most, from the beginning of her appearance she was stik okay, the peak was in chapter 138 okay i drop it. the story that was i initially good was potential to be stupid because os stupid love, the stupid female lead and a burden luke sakura. i might save the chapter when there are a lot and just see the final chapter ig the story gets more stupid bullshut lover i am done
A good book which has a very nice balance of story and romance. From the first few chapters one can get a proper vibe of the book. This sets up a pretty good foundation for the rest of the story. The story never tries to be other than it was introduced in the beginning, as a result we have a very grounded approach to the story progression. The mc is op but that’s never the concern of this book, the main focus is building relationships and personalities. The book adds a lot of new elements to the ‘Extra’ genre. We start with basic mc dying but intrestingly he wasn’t the one who met the Godess, someone else wished for the mc to be transmigrated. But the story he is sent to is a transmigrated Villain story. Its just intresting to see how the author just subtly incorporated this into the story. Normally I am not in the favor is systems but the system in this book has a unique charm and personality. Its actually a partner than a robotic quest generator. Writing quality of the book is actually pretty good with a good pace. The mc has a smart personality and does not act interact with the other 2 protagonists. He has in own goals and isn’t scared to change the events of the story. Nor does he care about the plot. Another important pro is that the author is actually active in communication. Even though the book has 160+ chapters , I still have a high chance of getting a reply from the author for a comment on the 40th chapter. This is very rare for most books. Again there are always some flaws like the academy tag, just being a plot device for introducing characters. I would also appreciate a bit more slice of life aspect to the story. It would be nice if the personalities and feelings of the FL’s would be more flushed out. I would have also appreciated a bit more world building. Because we somtimes I feel like we are dealing with a more medival vibe with magical devices but the next day our mc is in a amusement park going on a rollercoaster or someone is using a mini recording device to stay the mc. All in all this might not be the most unique book out there but the book knows what niche it is satisfying. And that’s something which I value very much, as from the beginning to the end I am getting what I paid for. This is a very good book for a casual reader and hope more people support and read this book in the future.
Absolute gem! This is the perfect word to describe this novel. Decisive and scheming, the smart and ruthless main character cares for his loved ones. I have to tell you that at the start, it feels slow-paced, but believe me, it has purpose, and it’s absolutely worth it. This novel hooked me from the end of its first chapter, and as new chapters come, it becomes even more interesting, leaving us with many questions about what to expect. It’s just that good! you can try it yourself.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
🙂 - Regular Updates ✅️ - A Good story ✅️ - Writing quality ✅️ -Reincarnation ✅️ -System ✅️ -OP MC ✅️ -World ✅️ -Romance ✅️ -Acadmy ✔️ Well I can only tell this much since novel is in it's early phases but it's an interesting novel worth of time....[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] ohhh and AUTHOR ✅️ ✔️ ✅️ ✔️ ✅️ ✔️ ✅️
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Damn, another extra novel but it blew me away. It's unique from the normal extra novels and you will see what I meant by unique when you read it. Anyways back to the point, the starting few chaps are good. the author really knows how to build up a nice plot and even though it's only the starting I can author has planned, he ain't like those other authors. good but there is a problem, only few chapters are released. Author let me warn you, start releasing the chaps in mass stock or I will transmigrate in your own novel. This is not an understatement.
the twist with the "system" is a cool idea and the writing is good, the pacing is good except the 3 first chapters. so far i recommend trying it (ch13)
What do I think about my book? Of course, I think that it's the best book out there, so I'm gonna rate it 5 star, as for the book's review, all I can tell you guys is already there in the synopsis. Use this review of mine as a place for your inquiries, if you have any, that is. Oh, and if you are reading this review, I would suggest that you at least give this book a try.
From the screen to the blade, to the grave, then the book Guess my plans weren’t as solid as they looked Always schemin’, but my group stabbed in the back Thought I was ruthless, turns out I was cooked See, I believed if I climbed up to the peak I'd own it all, but betrayal cut me deep Yeah, I killed the traitor, but karma wasn’t cheap Now I’m six feet under, and I can’t even sleep Woah-oh-oh This is how the story begins Woah-oh-oh Guess my life needed some high stakes Reborn now in some fantasy plot that my gf read The same old goal, but with waifus I forgot I sought Beast girls , a system that's hot And a goddess with secrets, I can't smash Woah-oh-oh This is how my harem grows Woah-oh-oh Guess this is how I tame beasts From "kill or be killed" to "pet or hug" These overpowered bunnies got me questioning the end But I’ll rise to the top—yeah, again and again ‘Cause in this wacky world, *I’m the kingpin, my friend!* Woah-oh-oh Plot twists keep coming, who even knows Woah-oh-oh Guess this is how the story goes!
This story hits all the best points! I generally HATE romance plots but the twist on this one is absolutely brilliant so far and not forced in the least. The mc is op without being overly arrogant or stupid af (so far). The story sucks you in right from the first paragraph and never lets go. The writing is fluid and engaging, full of comic relief without getting dopey. Looking forward to more chapters. The world building was detailed and graphic without getting boring or repetitive. I’m in love so far 💜. Keep up the great work!
This is a very unusual novel. Nothing much seems to happen, but the story moves forward. The way the System is presented and how the MC interacts with it (her) is truly unique. The MC is powerful but we don't know to what extent. He trains, but we don't see it. Some battles occur, but we don't see them. Some difficulties arise, but they are solved in the background, without the reader knowing how. In a way, the title is somewhat misguiding and the story is moving towards a slice of life. It's soon to tell if it will remain like that or if it is just a preparation for what is coming.
extremely well written and great. that's all I can think of. characters have very distinct personality and dialogues floe naturally and not to mention it's very well written too.
i hate zahara's character the most, from the beginning of her appearance she was stik okay, the peak was in chapter 138 okay i drop it. the story that was i initially good was potential to be stupid because os stupid love, the stupid female lead and a burden luke sakura. i might save the chapter when there are a lot and just see the final chapter ig the story gets more stupid bullshut lover i am done
A good book which has a very nice balance of story and romance. From the first few chapters one can get a proper vibe of the book. This sets up a pretty good foundation for the rest of the story. The story never tries to be other than it was introduced in the beginning, as a result we have a very grounded approach to the story progression. The mc is op but that’s never the concern of this book, the main focus is building relationships and personalities. The book adds a lot of new elements to the ‘Extra’ genre. We start with basic mc dying but intrestingly he wasn’t the one who met the Godess, someone else wished for the mc to be transmigrated. But the story he is sent to is a transmigrated Villain story. Its just intresting to see how the author just subtly incorporated this into the story. Normally I am not in the favor is systems but the system in this book has a unique charm and personality. Its actually a partner than a robotic quest generator. Writing quality of the book is actually pretty good with a good pace. The mc has a smart personality and does not act interact with the other 2 protagonists. He has in own goals and isn’t scared to change the events of the story. Nor does he care about the plot. Another important pro is that the author is actually active in communication. Even though the book has 160+ chapters , I still have a high chance of getting a reply from the author for a comment on the 40th chapter. This is very rare for most books. Again there are always some flaws like the academy tag, just being a plot device for introducing characters. I would also appreciate a bit more slice of life aspect to the story. It would be nice if the personalities and feelings of the FL’s would be more flushed out. I would have also appreciated a bit more world building. Because we somtimes I feel like we are dealing with a more medival vibe with magical devices but the next day our mc is in a amusement park going on a rollercoaster or someone is using a mini recording device to stay the mc. All in all this might not be the most unique book out there but the book knows what niche it is satisfying. And that’s something which I value very much, as from the beginning to the end I am getting what I paid for. This is a very good book for a casual reader and hope more people support and read this book in the future.
Absolute gem! This is the perfect word to describe this novel. Decisive and scheming, the smart and ruthless main character cares for his loved ones. I have to tell you that at the start, it feels slow-paced, but believe me, it has purpose, and it’s absolutely worth it. This novel hooked me from the end of its first chapter, and as new chapters come, it becomes even more interesting, leaving us with many questions about what to expect. It’s just that good! you can try it yourself.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
🙂 - Regular Updates ✅️ - A Good story ✅️ - Writing quality ✅️ -Reincarnation ✅️ -System ✅️ -OP MC ✅️ -World ✅️ -Romance ✅️ -Acadmy ✔️ Well I can only tell this much since novel is in it's early phases but it's an interesting novel worth of time....[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] ohhh and AUTHOR ✅️ ✔️ ✅️ ✔️ ✅️ ✔️ ✅️
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Damn, another extra novel but it blew me away. It's unique from the normal extra novels and you will see what I meant by unique when you read it. Anyways back to the point, the starting few chaps are good. the author really knows how to build up a nice plot and even though it's only the starting I can author has planned, he ain't like those other authors. good but there is a problem, only few chapters are released. Author let me warn you, start releasing the chaps in mass stock or I will transmigrate in your own novel. This is not an understatement.
the twist with the "system" is a cool idea and the writing is good, the pacing is good except the 3 first chapters. so far i recommend trying it (ch13)
What do I think about my book? Of course, I think that it's the best book out there, so I'm gonna rate it 5 star, as for the book's review, all I can tell you guys is already there in the synopsis. Use this review of mine as a place for your inquiries, if you have any, that is. Oh, and if you are reading this review, I would suggest that you at least give this book a try.