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This is plain trash, I don't like this fanfic. I like the older fanfic, but this one is beyond abomination. This is just disgusting to be honest.
meh, A mediocre idea. Mediocre implementation. The language of writing using AI will make anything boring and uninteresting. A lot of illogicalities and inaccuracies of lore accumulate and make the reading process annoying. And a lot of other things that I'm too lazy to write about. In my opinion, the work does not deserve a full-fledged review - there is nothing to improve in it, it is half bad and half just readable. I'm sorry for the time spent. Oh! Frequent updates are a plus.
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Great novel---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I loved this fanfiction and I hope you don't drop it, author-san. In the daily update, I will support you with power stones. And Freya is the best wife ❤️❤️ . . . . . . . . .
I like the story however r u really gonna give hephaestusto to welf he was her kid too and she was down as long as someone from her family surpassed her she would be with them and because he reincarnated she in no way is his mom shes more of welfs mom then mcs. doesn't it give u cuck vibes to give her up to a child
I'm tired of Ai overtaking the stories where authors put in actual effort. So, here.
It is a great story, one of the best in Danmachi, compared to your last book you can see a lot of improvement, I love the main character, and although I am not a fan of the harem, I trust that you will handle it well.
I always love the blacksmith stories, and atleast in this one he doesn't have to start at the beginning. It has been fun to read and I hope it gets a lot of updates.
Don't make it a harem, it will ruin the novel.............................................................................................................
I love this, it’s one of top3 danmachi for me I like it’s depth and character POV I just hope you don’t drop it……………………………………………………………………………….
It's always great to see a new danmachi fic. I can't wait to read more in the future.........................................................
keep up the great work it would be cool if he got shirou emiya power.............................................................................
Grandpa said that if your biggest fan is not yourself, then there is a problem with you... as a novel that I put effort into making will naturally give me 5 stars, I hope you like it. Follow my profile if you want to be aware of future stories!
This is plain trash, I don't like this fanfic. I like the older fanfic, but this one is beyond abomination. This is just disgusting to be honest.
meh, A mediocre idea. Mediocre implementation. The language of writing using AI will make anything boring and uninteresting. A lot of illogicalities and inaccuracies of lore accumulate and make the reading process annoying. And a lot of other things that I'm too lazy to write about. In my opinion, the work does not deserve a full-fledged review - there is nothing to improve in it, it is half bad and half just readable. I'm sorry for the time spent. Oh! Frequent updates are a plus.
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Great novel---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Good work . . Good work . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I loved this fanfiction and I hope you don't drop it, author-san. In the daily update, I will support you with power stones. And Freya is the best wife ❤️❤️ . . . . . . . . .
I like the story however r u really gonna give hephaestusto to welf he was her kid too and she was down as long as someone from her family surpassed her she would be with them and because he reincarnated she in no way is his mom shes more of welfs mom then mcs. doesn't it give u cuck vibes to give her up to a child
I'm tired of Ai overtaking the stories where authors put in actual effort. So, here.
It is a great story, one of the best in Danmachi, compared to your last book you can see a lot of improvement, I love the main character, and although I am not a fan of the harem, I trust that you will handle it well.
I always love the blacksmith stories, and atleast in this one he doesn't have to start at the beginning. It has been fun to read and I hope it gets a lot of updates.
Don't make it a harem, it will ruin the novel.............................................................................................................
I love this, it’s one of top3 danmachi for me I like it’s depth and character POV I just hope you don’t drop it……………………………………………………………………………….
It's always great to see a new danmachi fic. I can't wait to read more in the future.........................................................
keep up the great work it would be cool if he got shirou emiya power.............................................................................
Grandpa said that if your biggest fan is not yourself, then there is a problem with you... as a novel that I put effort into making will naturally give me 5 stars, I hope you like it. Follow my profile if you want to be aware of future stories!