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Pela primeira vez fiquei desejando que houvesse mais estrelas para dar em um avaliação. Como disse em um dos comentários, esta não é uma fanfic, é uma obra literária! Gramática, Imersão, Enredo... Muito bons! Ao autor(a), meus sinceros cumprimentos por disponibilizar tal obra de arte para que minha mente ávida por leitura pudesse apreciar. 👏👏💎
This is a great read! Suppperrr recommended!! Hope the author doesn't drop this!
Very good so far the first 20 chapters are a joy to read and I can't wait for more if you want my opinion this is definitely worth a read hopefully the author continues this trend.
maravilhoso 👏👏👏👏 a primeira FanFiction de TVD que conseguiu retratar os personagens de forma correta e com sentido, sem perder o rumo, se continuar com essa quantidade será uma das melhores FanFiction já escritas sobre o universo de TVD 👏👏👏👏
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Damn this is a good fanfic. It’s rare to find a TVD fanfic that isn’t either crack or slash (or both). The writing quality is great. The MC’s “golden finger” is OP, but still requires the Mc to put in some effort, so it doesn’t come off like everything’s handed to him on a silver platter. Does the author have a p*treon for advanced chapters?
This is the first TVD fanfic I read that I actually like. The Character's act like they would normally on the show. Normally these fanfics have the Mc's become obsessed with the OC trying to please him and I'm glad that it isn't the case with this story.
You do you, brother. I love your fanfic. Ignore haters. Please dont change the story; let it go with the flow.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
After who knows how many hours i spent on this app, this is the first good Vampire Diaries fic i have ever read, I started reading this expecting it to be just like every other failed TVD fic with horrendous dialogue and a stupid marry sue mc only to be pleasantly surprised with an actually decent fic, not that this mc isn't an op marry sue but at least the character interactions seems a bit genuine compared to the brain dead hentai logic that the other TVD fics operate on where everything perfectly aligns in the mc's favor no matter how stupid his decisions are and how everyone just falls on their knees and start sucking his toes whenever the mc shows up, so hat's off to you author.
only a small amount of chapters right now but this has really good potential. The OC is Likable, and has a understandable thought process. The story progresses nicely, not too fast or slow. Intriguing powers and is readily wanting to use them which is nice as well. Overall a wonderful read and as of this moment I cannot wait for more updates to come!
I really like it a lot, but if you could ramp up the update schedule, it'd be really appreciated. And please please please DON'T drop it. :D
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Nothing much to say but I feel Mc is way too op for this world and while being op can make things interesting,that’s not the case here. It’s just hard to take things seriously when my can casually resurrect people by ch 2 and his only limit is his imagination.
what can I say. Its just Gooooood...........................................................................................................
Enjoying it so far! my only problem is there aren't enough chapters! Whats the update schedule if ya got one? Also ya got a patreon with more chapters?
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Good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The only thing missing from the book is the chapter!!! The only thing missing from the book is the chapter!!! The only thing missing from the book is the chapter!!! The only thing missing from the book is the chapter!!!
Chapters a little short but off to a good start. Enjoying the read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
,..........................................................................Please don't stop writing ......................................................................................................................................................
phenomenal start writing style is smooth and easy to read 100% recommend. !excited for more!
The only thing missing from the book is the chapterThe only thing missing from the book is the chapterThe only thing missing from the book is the chapterThe only thing missing from the book is the chapter.
Pela primeira vez fiquei desejando que houvesse mais estrelas para dar em um avaliação. Como disse em um dos comentários, esta não é uma fanfic, é uma obra literária! Gramática, Imersão, Enredo... Muito bons! Ao autor(a), meus sinceros cumprimentos por disponibilizar tal obra de arte para que minha mente ávida por leitura pudesse apreciar. 👏👏💎
This is a great read! Suppperrr recommended!! Hope the author doesn't drop this!
Very good so far the first 20 chapters are a joy to read and I can't wait for more if you want my opinion this is definitely worth a read hopefully the author continues this trend.
maravilhoso 👏👏👏👏 a primeira FanFiction de TVD que conseguiu retratar os personagens de forma correta e com sentido, sem perder o rumo, se continuar com essa quantidade será uma das melhores FanFiction já escritas sobre o universo de TVD 👏👏👏👏
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Damn this is a good fanfic. It’s rare to find a TVD fanfic that isn’t either crack or slash (or both). The writing quality is great. The MC’s “golden finger” is OP, but still requires the Mc to put in some effort, so it doesn’t come off like everything’s handed to him on a silver platter. Does the author have a p*treon for advanced chapters?
This is the first TVD fanfic I read that I actually like. The Character's act like they would normally on the show. Normally these fanfics have the Mc's become obsessed with the OC trying to please him and I'm glad that it isn't the case with this story.
You do you, brother. I love your fanfic. Ignore haters. Please dont change the story; let it go with the flow.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
After who knows how many hours i spent on this app, this is the first good Vampire Diaries fic i have ever read, I started reading this expecting it to be just like every other failed TVD fic with horrendous dialogue and a stupid marry sue mc only to be pleasantly surprised with an actually decent fic, not that this mc isn't an op marry sue but at least the character interactions seems a bit genuine compared to the brain dead hentai logic that the other TVD fics operate on where everything perfectly aligns in the mc's favor no matter how stupid his decisions are and how everyone just falls on their knees and start sucking his toes whenever the mc shows up, so hat's off to you author.
only a small amount of chapters right now but this has really good potential. The OC is Likable, and has a understandable thought process. The story progresses nicely, not too fast or slow. Intriguing powers and is readily wanting to use them which is nice as well. Overall a wonderful read and as of this moment I cannot wait for more updates to come!
I really like it a lot, but if you could ramp up the update schedule, it'd be really appreciated. And please please please DON'T drop it. :D
Give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter give me more chapter
Nothing much to say but I feel Mc is way too op for this world and while being op can make things interesting,that’s not the case here. It’s just hard to take things seriously when my can casually resurrect people by ch 2 and his only limit is his imagination.
what can I say. Its just Gooooood...........................................................................................................
Enjoying it so far! my only problem is there aren't enough chapters! Whats the update schedule if ya got one? Also ya got a patreon with more chapters?
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Good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The only thing missing from the book is the chapter!!! The only thing missing from the book is the chapter!!! The only thing missing from the book is the chapter!!! The only thing missing from the book is the chapter!!!
Chapters a little short but off to a good start. Enjoying the read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
,..........................................................................Please don't stop writing ......................................................................................................................................................
phenomenal start writing style is smooth and easy to read 100% recommend. !excited for more!
The only thing missing from the book is the chapterThe only thing missing from the book is the chapterThe only thing missing from the book is the chapterThe only thing missing from the book is the chapter.