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four reasons for my rating without even reading a chapter 1 I read his other pokemon work and I liked his translation so this is more of a vote of confidence 2 he actively shares the name of the original and makes it clear that it's a translation 3 I read who the love interest would be and I can only say about Luna Lovegood, luna is love luna is life 4 Consistency of updates, the translator in general is pretty consistent with their update rate
The main character has nothing to do with the nobility! he's more like the friendly neighborhood guy who's seen a few movies about noble people and is trying to emulate them a little. He does not have an aura of nobility (The author sometimes tries to create it... but the next second he spoils everything by making him some kind of accessible simpleton). I'm very disappointed (I was expecting something more aristocratic and sophisticated...)
This is a great one, lowkey systems like this are the best. Plus the Gaint family isn’t ever really explored, I love when they go the pureblood route
I do understand what you're trying to achieve, I really do. With the over the top moments of "Pureblood" greetings and manners, hell, even penmanship, these all seem to have this unbelievable reaction from the adults around him. Its comes across as pretentious and artificial, By drawing attention to something that should be a natural state makes it come across as disingenuous. As an example, the Age of Samurai in Japan was a intense history of people whos highest goal in life was Honor and craftsmanship, both of which people dedicated their lives too, they lived it, they didn't "show off", and the people of the world recognized this, they didn't go around making grandiose actions and expecting people to bow at the feet of an 11 year old. That's the second annoyance, he's 11, now have you ever seen a 11 year old in a 3 piece suit at a wedding? It looks weird and out of place... and so does a 11 year old trying to sound/act like a 55 year old head butler for royalty. If you'd said Hogwarts starts at 18 then his behavior would have made somewhat more sense, but as it stands, I can believe in magic but not in an 11 year old trying to act like a "Pureblood" and experts with decades of experience being impressed. So I'd rate this as 5/10
man did you delete your other book about Pokemon or webnovel did it.............btw have not read this one can't comment still five stars
I really like the theme of gaunt family background and how the slytherin changed I really appreciate it and please continue this novel and continue the development of its story even the harry potter movie if finished add more to be more interesting
As a heads up translator stated on his patreon he will drop this and start up a one piece fic if he still isn't feeling this by the 100 chapter mark and currently it is at 91 on patreon
Another promissing Harry potter fanfic! Lets f go!!![img=Moneybags][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Overall a very good story so far. It is very well translated, if it didn’t say in the description that it was translated I wouldn’t have known.
Beautiful smoothness رررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااائئئئئئئئئعععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععع رائع
This not being harem is the main plus point for me...... I don't really like them in a harry potter like world setting plus the fl is luna which is another nice touch.... and great work translating so far
É bom e eu quero saber onde isso vai dar, por favor continue.........m...............................................................................................................................................
That's great!!!……...…................................. ... Another great translation of Harry Potter fanfic. .......................................... .........,.... ___.......
Story so far is good. What I’m most happy about with the story is your translation. It’s very well done. Keep up the great work.
Good fanfic........................................... keep it up.............................................. ...................................................
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Good very good Harry Potter novel no system only blooline and ingenius and talent good world construct and dialogues with characters 😎😎👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻💀👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Уже читал подобный фанфик и мне понравилось только жаль он больше не выходит буду болеть за тебя тут конец дальше просто символы.ррараоаоаоаоалалпополалсьплплмьпоммьплпьмллмлмлплпоплпопдвжадкораиатаьвлалалаплпо ок опопоплаоалаоалалсьсзаюшкьпбвжашалктсгабадршлктпрсьвщешпьпоарьвлраоьатраьпоопьао
Shameless 5 star review. You can expect daily updates. This is a Chinese fanfic so i am trying my best to smooth over the sentences and dialogues as much as possible. First time doing this so I apologize in advance for any mistakes.
four reasons for my rating without even reading a chapter 1 I read his other pokemon work and I liked his translation so this is more of a vote of confidence 2 he actively shares the name of the original and makes it clear that it's a translation 3 I read who the love interest would be and I can only say about Luna Lovegood, luna is love luna is life 4 Consistency of updates, the translator in general is pretty consistent with their update rate
The main character has nothing to do with the nobility! he's more like the friendly neighborhood guy who's seen a few movies about noble people and is trying to emulate them a little. He does not have an aura of nobility (The author sometimes tries to create it... but the next second he spoils everything by making him some kind of accessible simpleton). I'm very disappointed (I was expecting something more aristocratic and sophisticated...)
This is a great one, lowkey systems like this are the best. Plus the Gaint family isn’t ever really explored, I love when they go the pureblood route
I do understand what you're trying to achieve, I really do. With the over the top moments of "Pureblood" greetings and manners, hell, even penmanship, these all seem to have this unbelievable reaction from the adults around him. Its comes across as pretentious and artificial, By drawing attention to something that should be a natural state makes it come across as disingenuous. As an example, the Age of Samurai in Japan was a intense history of people whos highest goal in life was Honor and craftsmanship, both of which people dedicated their lives too, they lived it, they didn't "show off", and the people of the world recognized this, they didn't go around making grandiose actions and expecting people to bow at the feet of an 11 year old. That's the second annoyance, he's 11, now have you ever seen a 11 year old in a 3 piece suit at a wedding? It looks weird and out of place... and so does a 11 year old trying to sound/act like a 55 year old head butler for royalty. If you'd said Hogwarts starts at 18 then his behavior would have made somewhat more sense, but as it stands, I can believe in magic but not in an 11 year old trying to act like a "Pureblood" and experts with decades of experience being impressed. So I'd rate this as 5/10
man did you delete your other book about Pokemon or webnovel did it.............btw have not read this one can't comment still five stars
I really like the theme of gaunt family background and how the slytherin changed I really appreciate it and please continue this novel and continue the development of its story even the harry potter movie if finished add more to be more interesting
As a heads up translator stated on his patreon he will drop this and start up a one piece fic if he still isn't feeling this by the 100 chapter mark and currently it is at 91 on patreon
Another promissing Harry potter fanfic! Lets f go!!![img=Moneybags][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Overall a very good story so far. It is very well translated, if it didn’t say in the description that it was translated I wouldn’t have known.
Beautiful smoothness رررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررررااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااائئئئئئئئئعععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععععع رائع
This not being harem is the main plus point for me...... I don't really like them in a harry potter like world setting plus the fl is luna which is another nice touch.... and great work translating so far
É bom e eu quero saber onde isso vai dar, por favor continue.........m...............................................................................................................................................
That's great!!!……...…................................. ... Another great translation of Harry Potter fanfic. .......................................... .........,.... ___.......
Story so far is good. What I’m most happy about with the story is your translation. It’s very well done. Keep up the great work.
Good fanfic........................................... keep it up.............................................. ...................................................
Top.......................................................................top..............................................esperando mais.........................................................capítulos .................mmmmmm
Good very good Harry Potter novel no system only blooline and ingenius and talent good world construct and dialogues with characters 😎😎👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻💀👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Уже читал подобный фанфик и мне понравилось только жаль он больше не выходит буду болеть за тебя тут конец дальше просто символы.ррараоаоаоаоалалпополалсьплплмьпоммьплпьмллмлмлплпоплпопдвжадкораиатаьвлалалаплпо ок опопоплаоалаоалалсьсзаюшкьпбвжашалктсгабадршлктпрсьвщешпьпоарьвлраоьатраьпоопьао
Shameless 5 star review. You can expect daily updates. This is a Chinese fanfic so i am trying my best to smooth over the sentences and dialogues as much as possible. First time doing this so I apologize in advance for any mistakes.