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Great story so far.. story development is good. But i want to ask question is it harem or not..??
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Great story so far.. story development is good. But i want to ask question is it harem or not..??
Mtl? Is a chinese novel? [img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]