/ Anime & Comics / Multiversal Hotel
摘要
After a life marred by tragedy and regret, Arthur Peterson meets a sudden end during a violent robbery. However, instead of finding peace, he awakens in the shabby lobby of a mysterious hotel, trapped in the body of a young man with white hair and golden eyes.
Confused and disoriented, Arthur grapples with the reality of his reincarnation. Arthur discovers that this place is a crossroads of universes, from the amazing One Piece to the vast Marvel Universe.
But as the hotel expands and secrets unfold, Arthur must face the ultimate question: can he truly let go of the past and find hope in a new beginning, or will he remain trapped in the shadows of what once was?
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This story will have around 2500-3000 words/ch
Give this story a review will ya~
-RedScarf aka KujoW
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I really like the premise and the writing quality despite the amount of exposition. Not quite at the point of taking a paragraph to describe the color of a leaf but not that far off either at times. MC's trauma feels a bit like it's being forced to add depth so I hope that's not a big ongoing thing. Overall, it's looking like an excellent story with potential.
Obligatory review from the author. . I'm writing this review on my 30 chapter that I've write, so here we go. I see my early chapter and all i could say is, 'wow it quite drag huh'. I think my mindset at the time is to hit 15k words first whilst only having a pilot plot. it's my first time writing anything, so why not a fanfic. . Hopefully it's still tolerable for you guys. and english is my 3rd language so I use some ai to check my grammar and typo. If you like it leave a review will ya... . -🧣
MASS EFFECT WORLD PLEASE I NEED IT AND NEVER GET IT, IT COULD BE FUN TO READ THE HOTEL IN THE MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE HELPING THE HEROES AND ALIENS OF MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE.
AUTHOR THIS HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR A EPIC MULTIVERSE STORY..author the WORLDS the HOTEL needs to VISIT.1.MASS EFFECT game the hotel in a planet. 2,TENSURA anime.3.MUSHOKU TENSEI anime,4.BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLATER.4.TRANSFORMERS ONE movie all other universes.5.SUPERNATURAL TV show.6, NARUTO anime.7.fairy tail anime.8,BLEACH anime.9,DC and MARVEL..author DO NOT QUIT THIS NOVEL AFTER 7 CHAPTERS and WASTE MY TIME thanks you.
I thought this would be more of management or action oriented novel but it is a 'therapy novel' or 'fee fee novel'. Plus the usage of AI breaks the immersion. Its not that I dislike AI but this has too much redundant sentences which are basically plot filler sentences..
bro you have been explaining how tough the mc life is in his past in every chapter as far as I read. I love the story but the fillers which suthor uses in every chapter makes it tough. author is trying to make mc relatable to his customer I can understand but instead of completing in a single line you were Steaching it too far. for a past 7 chapter the story didn't move at all. just telling mc past for 3/4 part of the chapter and actual progressing is too slow.
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Awesome story concept and has the potential to be one of The Goats!!!! Can't wait for more chapters !!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🫡👍🐐🙏
Enjoyed but it started to get boring. It feels like theres no progress, there's no "Multiversal" just "Hotel" Its quite disappointing to be honest. At most you get Harry Potter and Newt. That's pretty much it.
卷 1 : Avalon
- 1 01. Down on Their Luck?? 1 months ago
- 2 02. The Golden Invitation 1 months ago
- 3 03. The Tug of Fate 1 months ago
- 4 04. The Boy Who Lived 1 months ago
- 5 05. A Room of One’s Own 1 months ago
- 6 06. Reflections and Revelations 1 months ago
- 7 07. Waking Shadows and New Heights 1 months ago
- 8 08. Morning of Firsts 1 months ago
- 9 09. A Day of Firsts 1 months ago
- 10 10. A Moment of Connection 1 months ago
- 11 11. The Farewells 1 months ago
- 12 12. The Invitation 1 months ago
- 13 13. Areas of Avalon 1 months ago
- 14 14. The Two Myth Within 1 months ago
- 15 15. Echoes of Power 1 months ago
- 16 16. The First Lesson and the Path Forward 1 months ago
- 17 17. Glimpse of the Unknown 1 months ago
- 18 18. An Unlikely Guests 1 months ago
- 19 19. More Area of Avalon 1 months ago
- 20 20. Martial Hall 1 months ago
- 21 21. The Witcher Duo 1 months ago
- 22 22. Weeks of Avalon 1 months ago
- 23 23. Legacies Forged and Bonds Sealed 1 months ago
- 24 24. Void Within 1 months ago
- 25 25. Brotherhood Over Tea 28 days ago
- 26 26. Frank’s Crash 26 days ago
- 27 27. A Place for the Lost and Found 25 days ago
- 28 28. Mar-Vell 23 days ago
卷 2 : Exploration 1: Harry Potter World
- 29 29. Poachers in the Black Forest 21 days ago
- 30 30. Marking the Path 19 days ago
- 31 31. Shadow in the Black Forest 17 days ago
- 32 32. Freedom for the Beasts 15 days ago
- 33 33. Mulan’s Mishap 13 days ago
- 34 34. Healing Bonds 11 days ago
- 35 35. Across the Atlantic: Preparations 9 days ago
- 36 36. The Conservation 9 days ago
- 37 37. Across the Atlantic: The Plan 9 days ago
- 38 38. A Landslide of an Ambush 9 days ago
- 39 39. Plans in Motion 9 days ago
- 40 ANNOUNCEMENT: Read Please 9 days ago
It is an amazing story start. One of the best starts that I have read in last few hours on this platform. My personal recommation to read it and give it a try. The stpry is captivating and interesting!