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I can only say that it is good, if only the chapters were longer. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As one of the oldest readers of this book, I say it is a masterpiece. Well thought out and written in many ways. The lack of Quincy route fan fiction, especially in the Bleach series, makes this book unique. Personally, I really like this idea. The main character's acquisition of the holy letter [A], interaction with other characters, etc. It was pretty good, plus the fact that the main character was smart was a plus.
揭示劇透
I think this one is quite interesting and I do recommend people to read it. The English could be better since the start but it has improved in the later chaps.
okay but Don't skimp on energy stones, let's climb the ranks together, When I don't have time, I upload at least one chapter a day. When I have free time, I upload up to two chapters. If there is more support, I will add more chapters. Don't forget to give your opinion in the positive evaluation. Thank you.
Before I am a translator or a writer, I am a reader, so I will give the highest evaluation, and I hope that you will be patient for the better events and to improve the writing and presentation. 🙏🙏🙏
Well here’s the thing: the translation isn’t bad, but the translator seems to enjoy going beyond editing and actually inserts their own ideas into the story. Now normally that wouldn’t be that bad, but the translator isn’t great at English themselves so it becomes confusing. Much of the story becomes “did I interpret that correctly”. Starting to feel like mtl
I can only say that it is good, if only the chapters were longer. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As one of the oldest readers of this book, I say it is a masterpiece. Well thought out and written in many ways. The lack of Quincy route fan fiction, especially in the Bleach series, makes this book unique. Personally, I really like this idea. The main character's acquisition of the holy letter [A], interaction with other characters, etc. It was pretty good, plus the fact that the main character was smart was a plus.
揭示劇透 I think this one is quite interesting and I do recommend people to read it. The English could be better since the start but it has improved in the later chaps.
okay but Don't skimp on energy stones, let's climb the ranks together, When I don't have time, I upload at least one chapter a day. When I have free time, I upload up to two chapters. If there is more support, I will add more chapters. Don't forget to give your opinion in the positive evaluation. Thank you.
Before I am a translator or a writer, I am a reader, so I will give the highest evaluation, and I hope that you will be patient for the better events and to improve the writing and presentation. 🙏🙏🙏
Well here’s the thing: the translation isn’t bad, but the translator seems to enjoy going beyond editing and actually inserts their own ideas into the story. Now normally that wouldn’t be that bad, but the translator isn’t great at English themselves so it becomes confusing. Much of the story becomes “did I interpret that correctly”. Starting to feel like mtl