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i like the novel and the mc. its good overall, i just hope the author do not drop this novel
i like the mc, though am more interested in Chloe. I like almost everything about the novel, well except the fact that he hasnt had any p**sy, lol
The book is great, looking forward to how he is going to use those runes, they seem way too great to be true. Love it. ......................
I recomend this book for those who are looking for a good plot, the Mc is good and normal life apart from the supernatural word is covered. Its good enough.
I like it, am on it for now, just hope it doesnt get ruined................................................................................................................
But isnt like the Mc levelling up a bit too fast, I see him already at the top of the food chain in the first few chapters. Am now curious how the author will develope this.
pliz author give us more chapters pliz, its a bummer waiting for the rest."""""""""""":::::::|?????<<<<<<<<<<<<< Teh hkved hgmcny fxnv btrgn b
This book is a bunger. I love, I just hope the author doesnt drop it. {{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}:::::::::::"""""""""""""?????seytg resj
Should have been a perfect 5 if not foe a few set backs, the auther edits chapters after publishing them, you read an unedited one then later discover it is now edited. But overall, its great.
I think I love it, Watts is an interesting person that I would like to see develope. Over all, the story is great.. h////////////////////////////////////////////////;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]][[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[==========------------9i99999998rw7q6555555
Great is the best book! I hope the author doesn't leave her, otherwise I'll be upset, but that's fine!------_-----------------------------------::::----:--------------_-__-_-_--₽--₽--₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽_--__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_₽--₽₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽--₽-₽₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-_-₽-₽--₽-₽-₽₽-_+_(₽(₽+₽;₽+₽+
I like the story, what the author is doing with it, how he is developing it. It's simply interesting, after all we all know how hard it is to develope a story with an overpowered main character
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I think it has the potential to grow into something beautiful, the writer is still an amateur in the beginning but I getting better, tho the novel itself is going in the right direction
First of all I would like to say im not a person who goes and spreads negativity and neither do I want to usually, u have a good world building and and good writing skills but Fuck u man… how does a being that’s supposed to have 1000x more intelligence and processing power than a normal human make mistakes that even a hobo living on the streets with a hint of common sense won’t make .? Like seriously ?? He thinks of his sister after his world domination from the underworld(like wtf is that ? That’s just a chunni dream that provides no benifits) … and after he knows that people are going to go after him and his family because of what he is , even after being given a warning from shadow that people will go after him , he doesn’t explain anything to his family …. Just says that he “needs to do this” for his parents and lets them roam around freely in a world where just a few hours ago they were surrounded by govt people who wanted to get them to make him listen ………. Bro all I can say is that u are a new author and are just trying to find a way to write overpowered mc story , but this is just not how to do it. I will freely admit that writing a story is not something I am capable of but thank god atleast I didn’t write this monstrosity of a novel . Absolute garbage .
揭示劇透 i like the novel and the mc. its good overall, i just hope the author do not drop this novel
i like the mc, though am more interested in Chloe. I like almost everything about the novel, well except the fact that he hasnt had any p**sy, lol
The book is great, looking forward to how he is going to use those runes, they seem way too great to be true. Love it. ......................
I recomend this book for those who are looking for a good plot, the Mc is good and normal life apart from the supernatural word is covered. Its good enough.
I like it, am on it for now, just hope it doesnt get ruined................................................................................................................
But isnt like the Mc levelling up a bit too fast, I see him already at the top of the food chain in the first few chapters. Am now curious how the author will develope this.
pliz author give us more chapters pliz, its a bummer waiting for the rest."""""""""""":::::::|?????<<<<<<<<<<<<< Teh hkved hgmcny fxnv btrgn b
This book is a bunger. I love, I just hope the author doesnt drop it. {{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}:::::::::::"""""""""""""?????seytg resj
Should have been a perfect 5 if not foe a few set backs, the auther edits chapters after publishing them, you read an unedited one then later discover it is now edited. But overall, its great.
I think I love it, Watts is an interesting person that I would like to see develope. Over all, the story is great.. h////////////////////////////////////////////////;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]][[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[==========------------9i99999998rw7q6555555
Great is the best book! I hope the author doesn't leave her, otherwise I'll be upset, but that's fine!------_-----------------------------------::::----:--------------_-__-_-_--₽--₽--₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽_--__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_₽--₽₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-₽--₽-₽₽-₽-₽-₽-₽-_-₽-₽--₽-₽-₽₽-_+_(₽(₽+₽;₽+₽+
I like the story, what the author is doing with it, how he is developing it. It's simply interesting, after all we all know how hard it is to develope a story with an overpowered main character
揭示劇透 I think it has the potential to grow into something beautiful, the writer is still an amateur in the beginning but I getting better, tho the novel itself is going in the right direction
First of all I would like to say im not a person who goes and spreads negativity and neither do I want to usually, u have a good world building and and good writing skills but Fuck u man… how does a being that’s supposed to have 1000x more intelligence and processing power than a normal human make mistakes that even a hobo living on the streets with a hint of common sense won’t make .? Like seriously ?? He thinks of his sister after his world domination from the underworld(like wtf is that ? That’s just a chunni dream that provides no benifits) … and after he knows that people are going to go after him and his family because of what he is , even after being given a warning from shadow that people will go after him , he doesn’t explain anything to his family …. Just says that he “needs to do this” for his parents and lets them roam around freely in a world where just a few hours ago they were surrounded by govt people who wanted to get them to make him listen ………. Bro all I can say is that u are a new author and are just trying to find a way to write overpowered mc story , but this is just not how to do it. I will freely admit that writing a story is not something I am capable of but thank god atleast I didn’t write this monstrosity of a novel . Absolute garbage .
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