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It rarely to come across story that will captivate you from the very beginning. I'm impressed, i look forward on how the story progresses.
Excellent Work. I like the MC's character. Haven't shown much about the world background as of chapter 8. Very few writing mistakes and good execution. Now if only there were more chapter updates than that would be perfect.
Very nice work. A really good execution of the concept, and very fun so far. Except for a few mistakes in the writing, the quality is amazing. Very much looking forward to reading this!
I've been waiting for a long time for a story like this and this one lives up to each and every one of my expectations. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the author develops his story in the future.
Love this story! It’s a hidden gem. I have always wanted to a read a story with this concept but never found one but now I finally can! Hopefully the author can live to the expectations but from what I have seen so far he definitely will. The only downside is that there aren’t enough chapters and the updates aren’t fast enough, authors please speed it up so I can read more, I can’t wait!
It rarely to come across story that will captivate you from the very beginning. I'm impressed, i look forward on how the story progresses.
Excellent Work. I like the MC's character. Haven't shown much about the world background as of chapter 8. Very few writing mistakes and good execution. Now if only there were more chapter updates than that would be perfect.
Very nice work. A really good execution of the concept, and very fun so far. Except for a few mistakes in the writing, the quality is amazing. Very much looking forward to reading this!
I've been waiting for a long time for a story like this and this one lives up to each and every one of my expectations. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the author develops his story in the future.
Love this story! It’s a hidden gem. I have always wanted to a read a story with this concept but never found one but now I finally can! Hopefully the author can live to the expectations but from what I have seen so far he definitely will. The only downside is that there aren’t enough chapters and the updates aren’t fast enough, authors please speed it up so I can read more, I can’t wait!