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Pretty mid, but I like how the Author is progressing the story. Probably improve it as the stories goes. [img=nervous] [img=nervous] [img=nervous] [img=nervous]
I love the story so far it's not generic and actually a good read. The first few chapters are bit dark, but it gets better. I hope the author doesn't drop [img=golden ticket] [img=golden ticket] [img=golden ticket] [img=golden ticket]
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I’m just leaving this here...my opinion might change as the story progresses, but so far, it’s a great read. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Shameless author review here! I'll try not to be biased, but let’s be honest, it’ll be a little biased. This story is heavily focused on the individual growth of each character. I admit, the pacing is a bit slow, but that’s intentional. I want to immerse you in the journey, making it feel as if you’re right there with them. The goal is to evoke genuine emotion, where every victory feels earned, rewarding, and relieving, rather than coming across as mere wishful thinking.
Can't give it too high of a review since it just started but I'm enjoying it so far. [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] v[img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift]
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Pretty mid, but I like how the Author is progressing the story. Probably improve it as the stories goes. [img=nervous] [img=nervous] [img=nervous] [img=nervous]
I love the story so far it's not generic and actually a good read. The first few chapters are bit dark, but it gets better. I hope the author doesn't drop [img=golden ticket] [img=golden ticket] [img=golden ticket] [img=golden ticket]
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I’m just leaving this here...my opinion might change as the story progresses, but so far, it’s a great read. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Shameless author review here! I'll try not to be biased, but let’s be honest, it’ll be a little biased. This story is heavily focused on the individual growth of each character. I admit, the pacing is a bit slow, but that’s intentional. I want to immerse you in the journey, making it feel as if you’re right there with them. The goal is to evoke genuine emotion, where every victory feels earned, rewarding, and relieving, rather than coming across as mere wishful thinking.
Can't give it too high of a review since it just started but I'm enjoying it so far. [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] v[img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift] [img=gift]