The Originals/Underworld: The Elder Mikaelson

ok Imma cut to the chase what ruined it for me was the whole five chapters maybe four after he died truth gave him some good powers but what really sucks is that this guy explained everything down to the bone wasting chapters to explain something that could have been used for character development character design world background and more like to it just seemed like you pulled one of the Chinese novel synopsis where they have describe what the mc gets and the random bystanders opinions. but you did it long drawn out spreading within those chapters the writing was fine smooth but but that was literally the only thing that bugged me I think underworld and TO/TVD combo is awesome i love both series tremendously. note:you also have crazy short chapters iaw the standard of webnovel i have seen smaller but other than that good work

The 6 chapter power intro was wild, but I ain't mad at it .to be honest I skipped those chapters cause I wanna know about his powers as he uses them, otherwise what good are his powers if it's not relevant to the story. anyway all this to say, I've read many TVD/TO fanfics and watched the underworld moveis and I'm excited for what direction you will take this story to. I'll be waiting.👍👍👍