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A Man in The Marvel Universe with Superman's templates.
No holding back.
Anything goes with this Mc.
So far it's been mainly action [7 ch] but I am gonna try incorporate slice of life as well cause I like writing slice of life.
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寫檢討Ok, First of all. I'm sorry. I know I said in previous coments I don't like a few things, like the system. But I accept how you handle them and let it be as minimal as possible. I'm enjoying the story. I hope you can continue for a good amount of time, considering we didn't even touch half of Iron Man 2008 as of ch 29 (I like the pace, by the way), so there's so much until Endgame. Also, even though I like harem stories, I don't mind only this Natasha for romance. Don't make it rushed. Let them interact, as if she were his handler for example. maybe a kiss on chapter 150 to show us progress. Please continue with the story at a regular, consistent pace if possible.
One of the best if not the best Superman Marvel fanfiction I have ever seen. Really captured the how people would react if they see a person with Superman's powers. Highly recommend to those seeing this review.
A fun read. Plenty of chapters. A story to follow and no harem in sight. Here’s five stars to keep you going. Thanks for the story.
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tem potencial, realmente tem potencial! Continue o bom trabalho autor!🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤗😎😸^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
One of the best if not the best Superman Marvel fanfiction I have ever seen. Really captured the how people would react if they see a person with Superman's powers. Highly recommend to those seeing this review.
It's good I am looking forward to more it balance everything he is not evil nor good a normal mindset guy with his own goals and it's great so far
Good !!!! 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 ........................................................................................... ..........................
Cap 10 Es un poco temprano para dar una reseña completa pero haré un intento. La calidad de escritura está bien. Aunque traduzco con Google no le e encontrado nada raro. El desarrollo de la historia va bien, el MC está en la etapa de mejorar su fuerza y dando los primeros pasos, hay algunas inconsistencias pero son cosas menores que no afectan a la trama en absoluto. En conclusión hasta el momento es un buen fic para pasar el rato. Mi recomendación al autor es escribir más de estilo de vida ya que el MC este peleando capitulo tras capitulo se vuelve aburrido muy rápido y seguramente hasta este se canse de escribir. Quizás podrías explorar el lado filosófico de superman que a mi parecer es su faceta más interesante y nunca a leído un fic que lo tratara, Explorar temas como la humanidad, el bien, la justicia, etc puede dar más complejidad al personaje y intercambiarlos con las escenas de acción da un descanso de estas. De todas formas es solo una recomendación personal por lo que tu decides que hacer. (Sí alguien conoce algún buen fic de superman donde no sea harem y fantasía de poder agradecería si me lo recomiendan)(No tiene porque ser un superman 100% del lado de la luz pero que ande matando por ahí solo porque si le quita la gracia de el personaje, si te estoy viendo a tu fic chino de superman genérico)
the same lame shit as every other superman in marvel fanfic. hes not actually as strong as superman. he starts learning magic gets a symbiote. im sure hell get the power stone or some other bullshit its immensely lame 😒🙄😴
Las habilidades del Superman post-crisis están bastante exageradas considerando que en un principio solo tiene el 6% de la plantilla.
Writing Quality is 4 because there is too much 'there' 'there' (Until latest chapter 41 (Chapter 39 Obadiah and Tony) there is 174 there and 55 their). In this novel there are also several incorrectly placed words such as there and their and them(maybe, because i forgot which one).
AUTHOR LOVE THIS NOVEL PLOT STORY, SUPERMAN IN MARVEL HAS BEEN DONE BUT FAILS BECAUSE THEY QUIT, AUTHOR I WANT TO SEE THE END SO DO NOT DESTROY OUR HOPES..AUTHOR SUPERMAN NEEDS TO TRAVEL TO OTHER ANIME AND GAME WORLDS BECAUSE IT COULD BE FUN AND WANT TO SEE SUPERMAN IN MASS EFFECT AND THE ANIME MUSHOKU TENSEI. OR SUPERMAN IN STAR WARS. THE AUTHOR OF THIS NOVEL IS GOLD