3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
it's a great story with brilliant story design. The thing i liked most is author 's writing style. no extra long, poetic ai generated description. but still detailed enough to immerse readers in story. author doesn't need ai to increase word count or describe things he knows his story well and also knows how to present it in best and simple manner
I’m the author, so i’m definitely not biased whe I tell you it’s absolutely amazing. Genuinely some of my best work since [A Reader’s Regression], I hope you give it at least 20 chapters so you can see how amazing this new world is. I find myself excited for what’s next even though i’m the one writing it and I hope it makes you feel the same way.
Bro maybe it’s just me but I don’t understand half of this. Maybe I skipped something but you never explained the past lives, and the power system is everywhere, but none of these things compar to the character interaction they make no sense. It’s like you shuffled ur chapters
it's a great story with brilliant story design. The thing i liked most is author 's writing style. no extra long, poetic ai generated description. but still detailed enough to immerse readers in story. author doesn't need ai to increase word count or describe things he knows his story well and also knows how to present it in best and simple manner
I’m the author, so i’m definitely not biased whe I tell you it’s absolutely amazing. Genuinely some of my best work since [A Reader’s Regression], I hope you give it at least 20 chapters so you can see how amazing this new world is. I find myself excited for what’s next even though i’m the one writing it and I hope it makes you feel the same way.
Bro maybe it’s just me but I don’t understand half of this. Maybe I skipped something but you never explained the past lives, and the power system is everywhere, but none of these things compar to the character interaction they make no sense. It’s like you shuffled ur chapters