Reviews of I am Sam witwicky(SI) by Theshadowveil7 - Webnovel

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4.04

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Ssantos
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é uma pena o autor ter desistido desta história, tinha muito potencial

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PainfullLife

It's an amazing story, I genuinely hope there will be more. there isn't nearly enough amazing transformers fics so I hope it continues.

1mth
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Master_Yoda_9999

It’s just a load of ai nonsense ……………….

2mth
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DaoistgS44ze

The whole plot is so forced I don't know what to say it doesn't even make sense I mean you have a freaking ai who monitors the hole world but can't even monitor entering the house than even after knowing all the plot the mc acts like an idiot moreover the writing and action are so cringed and gay I don't know what to say

2mth
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TLW
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Listen man, I need more. MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2mth
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Estelem_Shelym

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TreadwayHeinrich

I am a fan of my favorite Transformers movie and my favorite open world adventure video games. I wish a new story would emerge. What if Sam Witwicky was born? He gained wishes, abilities, system powers, an invention, an innovator, a creator of technology in the original Transformers movie 2007. Abilities System Powers Skills Memories Experiences All Genius Scientists Characters Inside My Mind Sam Witwicky

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3mth
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nzK7
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have you quit this novel or taking a break?

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Omarian_Bedward

This some really good shit man. Keep it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3mth
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Ssantos
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A história é boa, faltam ff sobre Transformers e está tem um grande potencial, espero que o autor não abandone, está demorando para postar.( autor, recomendo guardar alguns episódios na gaveta, para quando não tiver tempo de escrever)

3mth
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Mr_Shaboink

Wish fulfilment and amateur writing. so many plot holes and so unrealistic moments even with all those gifts just made me bored with the story progress thats all for my review.

3mth
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Boring and cringe 😅 [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]

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3mth
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Ratman27

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HYDE_6447

This book has a lot of potential if written how it is being written currently. It will be much appreciated if you DO NOT DROP THIS

3mth
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NunuXD
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Author said he was rewriting it but this is just slightly better than the original. The Mc isn't changing anything from the cannon besides fixing bee's voice... Bro have a army of Iron man suits and never used it just because the author don't wanna change the cannon 👎

3mth
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R_Franco

No lo abandones , me gusta mucho.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😁😁😁😁😁😁

3mth
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NeaCambelt

Yes [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

3mth
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Lightstrick558

uf señor alta historia se esta haciendo, por favor continue con la historia

3mth
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Darknight558

I haven't read it yet, I'm just going to start but seeing the title, the review and the comments (especially the good ones) we'll see how it goes but first 5 stars just because I'm good.

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Rellik_Snoe

The author has done a great job of incorporating his ideas into the transformers world.

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KazumaEquality

can't wait for more chapters, keep it up sir author❤️

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Alex_Kelian

What is going on in this fanfic the writer keeps on rewriting and the readers keep on trolling, but Amma be honest to you whoever is reading the reviews, don't be tricked by them and just start reading this fanfic, I promise you will like it .

3mth
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InternetSaint

"...alex who loved transformers is reincarnated as sam witwicky in the transformers bayverse universe with a few wishes..."

3mth
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Kaichen442

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3mth
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NeaCambelt

Srx ...... pourquoi réécriture [img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=In your face][img=In your face]

3mth
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RussianGuy

I'm tired of waiting to re-upload 3 times, the author will probably continue to do so, so good luck and good nerves to the readers[img=Cries]

3mth
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_VOIDLESS_

Did you just rewrite perfection, WHY what went through your head to make you rewrite this!!

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3mth
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Charly_MadSon

You should change the name of the FF to something like "IronMan reborn in Transformers" [img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]

4mth
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Genaro_Sanchez

Me encanta la historia es entretenida Y me gusta el nuevo sam y como va llendo la historia es agradable y un poco emosionante soy un fan de transformes me encantan sus películas y el fanfic de ellas

4mth
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SwordDomainGod1

Well, I posted a one star review earlier with some criticism on much of the bullshits and Sam being able to create technology that honestly requires way more intelligence than I believe he truly has. That shit nears level twelve intellect so I keep that point here. Beyond that, I followed the author's advice and kept reading. Not too bad considering everything else, there are enough good bits that can make you enjoy what's happening, but Sam's abilities really don't match the technological level of the cybertronians so there's still a lot of bullshit all the way to chapter 15. But if you can ignore all that it's readable, and you can get some enjoyment out of it. For the author, honestly, it would be better if you could build up his abilities from low to high gradually instead of coming up with all the things you did. Also, I don't think there is, but if so, you should add an AU warning at the description cause this can irk many readers, I included. That's all, good work and keep on doing your best, I hope your writing skills can grow as you publish more chapters.

4mth
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Ssantos
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é uma pena o autor ter desistido desta história, tinha muito potencial

3d
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PainfullLife

It's an amazing story, I genuinely hope there will be more. there isn't nearly enough amazing transformers fics so I hope it continues.

1mth
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Master_Yoda_9999

It’s just a load of ai nonsense ……………….

2mth
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DaoistgS44ze

The whole plot is so forced I don't know what to say it doesn't even make sense I mean you have a freaking ai who monitors the hole world but can't even monitor entering the house than even after knowing all the plot the mc acts like an idiot moreover the writing and action are so cringed and gay I don't know what to say

2mth
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TLW
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Listen man, I need more. MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2mth
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Estelem_Shelym

Muito bom e interessante ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

2mth
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TreadwayHeinrich

I am a fan of my favorite Transformers movie and my favorite open world adventure video games. I wish a new story would emerge. What if Sam Witwicky was born? He gained wishes, abilities, system powers, an invention, an innovator, a creator of technology in the original Transformers movie 2007. Abilities System Powers Skills Memories Experiences All Genius Scientists Characters Inside My Mind Sam Witwicky

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3mth
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nzK7
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have you quit this novel or taking a break?

3mth
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Omarian_Bedward

This some really good shit man. Keep it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3mth
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Ssantos
LV 13 Badge

A história é boa, faltam ff sobre Transformers e está tem um grande potencial, espero que o autor não abandone, está demorando para postar.( autor, recomendo guardar alguns episódios na gaveta, para quando não tiver tempo de escrever)

3mth
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Mr_Shaboink

Wish fulfilment and amateur writing. so many plot holes and so unrealistic moments even with all those gifts just made me bored with the story progress thats all for my review.

3mth
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Boring and cringe 😅 [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]

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3mth
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Ratman27

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3mth
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HYDE_6447

This book has a lot of potential if written how it is being written currently. It will be much appreciated if you DO NOT DROP THIS

3mth
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NunuXD
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Author said he was rewriting it but this is just slightly better than the original. The Mc isn't changing anything from the cannon besides fixing bee's voice... Bro have a army of Iron man suits and never used it just because the author don't wanna change the cannon 👎

3mth
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R_Franco

No lo abandones , me gusta mucho.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😆🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😁😁😁😁😁😁

3mth
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NeaCambelt

Yes [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

3mth
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Lightstrick558

uf señor alta historia se esta haciendo, por favor continue con la historia

3mth
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Darknight558

I haven't read it yet, I'm just going to start but seeing the title, the review and the comments (especially the good ones) we'll see how it goes but first 5 stars just because I'm good.

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3mth
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Rellik_Snoe

The author has done a great job of incorporating his ideas into the transformers world.

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3mth
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KazumaEquality

can't wait for more chapters, keep it up sir author❤️

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3mth
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Alex_Kelian

What is going on in this fanfic the writer keeps on rewriting and the readers keep on trolling, but Amma be honest to you whoever is reading the reviews, don't be tricked by them and just start reading this fanfic, I promise you will like it .

3mth
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InternetSaint

"...alex who loved transformers is reincarnated as sam witwicky in the transformers bayverse universe with a few wishes..."

3mth
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Kaichen442

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3mth
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NeaCambelt

Srx ...... pourquoi réécriture [img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=In your face][img=In your face]

3mth
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RussianGuy

I'm tired of waiting to re-upload 3 times, the author will probably continue to do so, so good luck and good nerves to the readers[img=Cries]

3mth
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_VOIDLESS_

Did you just rewrite perfection, WHY what went through your head to make you rewrite this!!

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3mth
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Charly_MadSon

You should change the name of the FF to something like "IronMan reborn in Transformers" [img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]

4mth
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Genaro_Sanchez

Me encanta la historia es entretenida Y me gusta el nuevo sam y como va llendo la historia es agradable y un poco emosionante soy un fan de transformes me encantan sus películas y el fanfic de ellas

4mth
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SwordDomainGod1

Well, I posted a one star review earlier with some criticism on much of the bullshits and Sam being able to create technology that honestly requires way more intelligence than I believe he truly has. That shit nears level twelve intellect so I keep that point here. Beyond that, I followed the author's advice and kept reading. Not too bad considering everything else, there are enough good bits that can make you enjoy what's happening, but Sam's abilities really don't match the technological level of the cybertronians so there's still a lot of bullshit all the way to chapter 15. But if you can ignore all that it's readable, and you can get some enjoyment out of it. For the author, honestly, it would be better if you could build up his abilities from low to high gradually instead of coming up with all the things you did. Also, I don't think there is, but if so, you should add an AU warning at the description cause this can irk many readers, I included. That's all, good work and keep on doing your best, I hope your writing skills can grow as you publish more chapters.

4mth
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