2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
LV 3 ![Badge]()
Good writing. Easy to understand and flow with the story. Needs a slight improvement in minor details, but overall great. Story is interesting. A cruel beast and an adorable princess. Familiar but intriguing. Character designing is done amazingly. World building is yet to be explored but up until now, well done!
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Good writing. Easy to understand and flow with the story. Needs a slight improvement in minor details, but overall great. Story is interesting. A cruel beast and an adorable princess. Familiar but intriguing. Character designing is done amazingly. World building is yet to be explored but up until now, well done!
Good story premise and good pacing, quite easy to understand . I like it