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Your plot is amazing and chapter 1 is perfectly written can't wait to read future chapters.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Very nice plot. Actually giving the readers who to hate in Chapter 1 is a great way to to start a story in this case it was Luchen Everything is a 10/10 except the tenses in the writing like some words were used in present tense instead of past tense but overall it's good
So far so good you i also they encounter was well written between the arranged.
A great romance novel! Still reading the chapters and can't wait to see where this end
Your plot is amazing and chapter 1 is perfectly written can't wait to read future chapters.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Very nice plot. Actually giving the readers who to hate in Chapter 1 is a great way to to start a story in this case it was Luchen Everything is a 10/10 except the tenses in the writing like some words were used in present tense instead of past tense but overall it's good
So far so good you i also they encounter was well written between the arranged.
A great romance novel! Still reading the chapters and can't wait to see where this end