4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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Is it serious that you have the audacity and audacity to say that this fanfic is yours? LOL Any minimally experienced reader (literally anyone) could easily tell that this is a translation just from the synopsis! (google translate) Note: if you delete my comment you can be sure that I will come back as many times as necessary to rewrite it!!!
me gusta la idea espero que la continúes escribiendo para apoyarte [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
Is it serious that you have the audacity and audacity to say that this fanfic is yours? LOL Any minimally experienced reader (literally anyone) could easily tell that this is a translation just from the synopsis! (google translate) Note: if you delete my comment you can be sure that I will come back as many times as necessary to rewrite it!!!
me gusta la idea espero que la continúes escribiendo para apoyarte [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
is this book dropped author. when will be the next update.