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The grammar is nearly unreadable and the Chinese vibes are too much , like what the heck is "her mouth tasted like green plumes" , how can MC taste her mouth when he is recieving a blow**b, it's so weird. It's like horrendous, the dude didn't even bother translating he just copy pasted the machine translation.
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The grammar is nearly unreadable and the Chinese vibes are too much , like what the heck is "her mouth tasted like green plumes" , how can MC taste her mouth when he is recieving a blow**b, it's so weird. It's like horrendous, the dude didn't even bother translating he just copy pasted the machine translation.
Those who like Netori are truly cultured people[img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
IF YOU LIKE FATEFIC THEN YOU MUST READ THIS BECAUSE IT IS GUARANTEED TO BE GOOD AND NOT LIKE THE MARKET FATEFIC ON THIS PLATFORM IF YOU LIKE FATEFIC THEN YOU MUST READ THIS BECAUSE IT IS GUARANTEED TO BE GOOD AND NOT LIKE THE MARKET FATEFIC ON THIS PLATFORM