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tiring to read, the author likes to make his work too watery, the first part of the first chapter alone is useless watery and skippable there's a lot of skippable part just like when the author is describing the MC pacing back and forth in his square apartment
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Here I am posting a review I never posted one usually I just comment but I am going because of two things First the potential and the quality of the story Second the talent of the Author
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
A story that keeps you engaging & keeps your interest to read. Hope it reaches it's grand completion on it's journey.
tiring to read, the author likes to make his work too watery, the first part of the first chapter alone is useless watery and skippable there's a lot of skippable part just like when the author is describing the MC pacing back and forth in his square apartment
I have talent [img=proud][img=thinking][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Here I am posting a review I never posted one usually I just comment but I am going because of two things First the potential and the quality of the story Second the talent of the Author
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
A story that keeps you engaging & keeps your interest to read. Hope it reaches it's grand completion on it's journey.