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The story feels force on how it tries to portray dark themes as it feels like its just their for the sake of being edgy to an almost cartoonish level. The MC's backstory is a cliche tragic story that really doesn't even give a feeling of tragedy just the overall cliche way of what a tragic backstory is. It feels like edgy for the sake of being edgy that its not even a good read.
oye ya casi pasa un mes cuando lo vas actualizar, ademas viste ARCANE esta muy bueno ............ .. . . .... ....................................................
yesyesyesyesyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeessssssssss let gooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thx to that gravity falls fic of yours, another hidden gem is now inserted in my library, you have no idea how obscure these types of fics. and a well written one at that, I just hope that you did not lose the motivation on writing this masterpiece.
I highly recommend it. It's enough to start the novel with this dark game, and the grammar is almost perfect. If you have trouble with dark novels and have a weak heart, go read something else.
I'm waiting for you to upload the rest of the chapters and I also hope you'll add a black comedy later, that would be fun, have a good day buddy.
Good novel. And by the way, there are no fans of this game, even though it's good. Maybe because it's dark, I don't know. I also like that there are no grammatical mistakes.
This story contains elements that many may not appreciate, such as inc**st and other things, but I will do my best to write a decent fanfiction. So, if you're not interested, feel free to move along
The story feels force on how it tries to portray dark themes as it feels like its just their for the sake of being edgy to an almost cartoonish level. The MC's backstory is a cliche tragic story that really doesn't even give a feeling of tragedy just the overall cliche way of what a tragic backstory is. It feels like edgy for the sake of being edgy that its not even a good read.
oye ya casi pasa un mes cuando lo vas actualizar, ademas viste ARCANE esta muy bueno ............ .. . . .... ....................................................
yesyesyesyesyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeessssssssss let gooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thx to that gravity falls fic of yours, another hidden gem is now inserted in my library, you have no idea how obscure these types of fics. and a well written one at that, I just hope that you did not lose the motivation on writing this masterpiece.
I highly recommend it. It's enough to start the novel with this dark game, and the grammar is almost perfect. If you have trouble with dark novels and have a weak heart, go read something else.
I'm waiting for you to upload the rest of the chapters and I also hope you'll add a black comedy later, that would be fun, have a good day buddy.
Good novel. And by the way, there are no fans of this game, even though it's good. Maybe because it's dark, I don't know. I also like that there are no grammatical mistakes.
This story contains elements that many may not appreciate, such as inc**st and other things, but I will do my best to write a decent fanfiction. So, if you're not interested, feel free to move along
I got hooked already when i see Andy and leyley as the book cover.