4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I’ve read to chapter 44. So far the story is pleasant and I can see how the plot will develop. The FL is a Mary Sue who has all these skill despite being only 18. The ML is heads over heels for her very early on. It does seem to be another MTL novel. I wish the uploader would do a quick review before uploading. There are careless mistakes that can’t get pretty annoying. So I like the story, but the spelling and punctuation mistakes are so numerous that I would not spend coins on it.
So far, going well. FL doesn't seem weak. I’m only on chapter 15, let's see how the rest of the chapters play out.
This story is exciting…I’ve read to 120 and can’t wait to see what happens next and how the FL’s brothers will react when they see her and what will happen when her real identity is announced to the whole world
I’ve read to chapter 44. So far the story is pleasant and I can see how the plot will develop. The FL is a Mary Sue who has all these skill despite being only 18. The ML is heads over heels for her very early on. It does seem to be another MTL novel. I wish the uploader would do a quick review before uploading. There are careless mistakes that can’t get pretty annoying. So I like the story, but the spelling and punctuation mistakes are so numerous that I would not spend coins on it.
So far, going well. FL doesn't seem weak. I’m only on chapter 15, let's see how the rest of the chapters play out.
This story is exciting…I’ve read to 120 and can’t wait to see what happens next and how the FL’s brothers will react when they see her and what will happen when her real identity is announced to the whole world