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I stoped reding after some no name pirate was able to kidnap luffy right.in front of shanks..... and reason he is able to do that is because of smoke bomb 😞. Lol man
hello author i'm add this cause got interest by title and read it...i want ask how is your update time cause it's interesting fanfic
Hello, i just added this story to my collection, and wanted to Ask you, if MC will create his own Crew, or joins Luffy together in his Journey, and if Nami and Robin will become his Wifes to,?
I don't understand what is driving the author to continue writing this novel. because each chapter gets worse than the previous one. Chapters 1-30 are just a prologue, and the abilities the main character gets from the system are useless. The main character's condition goes from being a vegetable, to crippled, to sickly, then gets better, and finally becomes normal.... and it takes 30 full chapters for him to recover.
I stoped reding after some no name pirate was able to kidnap luffy right.in front of shanks..... and reason he is able to do that is because of smoke bomb 😞. Lol man
hello author i'm add this cause got interest by title and read it...i want ask how is your update time cause it's interesting fanfic
Hello, i just added this story to my collection, and wanted to Ask you, if MC will create his own Crew, or joins Luffy together in his Journey, and if Nami and Robin will become his Wifes to,?
I don't understand what is driving the author to continue writing this novel. because each chapter gets worse than the previous one. Chapters 1-30 are just a prologue, and the abilities the main character gets from the system are useless. The main character's condition goes from being a vegetable, to crippled, to sickly, then gets better, and finally becomes normal.... and it takes 30 full chapters for him to recover.