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Follow a crazed lunatic as she ravages the world of JJK. 5/5 stars. Would recommend.
I never read chainsaw man, but in my head, makima, she's more of evil behind the scenes and not like a chinese young master, so it kind of let down to me to read how makima get portrayed in this fanfic, but maybe I'm too soon to judge this fanfic.
The story is very well written. You are a good writer, I have nothing to say about that. But even if your main character is well constructed, I have nothing but dislike for her and even wish to see her put in her place. Which is paradoxical because in general, I like anti-hero/antagonist stories. But a character who has no moral boundaries is beyond what I can tolerate. Which made my rating a bit tricky. So this is how I went about it : “Character Design” can be divided into two sub-criteria : - Is the character well written ? YES - Is the character appreciable in its design ? NO So it would be 50/50 or 2.5. But do the two criteria have the same weight ? No, I think pure design is more important than appreciation for the purpose of this criterion. So we would start with a 70/30 ratio or 3.5. (Round it at 3) As for "Story Development" : The story itself is good but its direction is horrible (no thanks to the MC). And unlike the previous criterion, it is the appreciation which takes precedence, i.e. 1.5 (round it at 1). And I can't give a full rating to "World Background" because the fanfic hasn't really shown if there really is mastery on this point so -1.
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I've given the story five stars but saying that I'm not reading anymore the writing is good the story is good the main character makima seems like her anime self but the reason why I'm not reading this anymore is that I just didn't like the part of the main character killing her mother that just killed the entire story for me so everything was good it was a good dark character but I just can't finish the story where the main character killed one of their own family members
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This shit is pure Peak. if you like a freaky hater MC, you'll love this fic as it captures Makima's character perfectly also she dunks on Bumta, which is even peaker
this is pretty fun. if you love makima as a character then you will probably enjoy this. there aren't many chapter yet but i like it cuz i love evil mc
This is my second work. With this new creation, I want to keep improving and exploring complex characters, as well as themes that interest me, such as power dynamics and human nature. My expectations with this story are to learn more about writing. I truly appreciate anyone taking the time to read, and any comments or suggestions are welcome. I hope you enjoy this work as much as I’ve enjoyed developing it!
Follow a crazed lunatic as she ravages the world of JJK. 5/5 stars. Would recommend.
I never read chainsaw man, but in my head, makima, she's more of evil behind the scenes and not like a chinese young master, so it kind of let down to me to read how makima get portrayed in this fanfic, but maybe I'm too soon to judge this fanfic.
The story is very well written. You are a good writer, I have nothing to say about that. But even if your main character is well constructed, I have nothing but dislike for her and even wish to see her put in her place. Which is paradoxical because in general, I like anti-hero/antagonist stories. But a character who has no moral boundaries is beyond what I can tolerate. Which made my rating a bit tricky. So this is how I went about it : “Character Design” can be divided into two sub-criteria : - Is the character well written ? YES - Is the character appreciable in its design ? NO So it would be 50/50 or 2.5. But do the two criteria have the same weight ? No, I think pure design is more important than appreciation for the purpose of this criterion. So we would start with a 70/30 ratio or 3.5. (Round it at 3) As for "Story Development" : The story itself is good but its direction is horrible (no thanks to the MC). And unlike the previous criterion, it is the appreciation which takes precedence, i.e. 1.5 (round it at 1). And I can't give a full rating to "World Background" because the fanfic hasn't really shown if there really is mastery on this point so -1.
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I've given the story five stars but saying that I'm not reading anymore the writing is good the story is good the main character makima seems like her anime self but the reason why I'm not reading this anymore is that I just didn't like the part of the main character killing her mother that just killed the entire story for me so everything was good it was a good dark character but I just can't finish the story where the main character killed one of their own family members
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This shit is pure Peak. if you like a freaky hater MC, you'll love this fic as it captures Makima's character perfectly also she dunks on Bumta, which is even peaker
this is pretty fun. if you love makima as a character then you will probably enjoy this. there aren't many chapter yet but i like it cuz i love evil mc
This is my second work. With this new creation, I want to keep improving and exploring complex characters, as well as themes that interest me, such as power dynamics and human nature. My expectations with this story are to learn more about writing. I truly appreciate anyone taking the time to read, and any comments or suggestions are welcome. I hope you enjoy this work as much as I’ve enjoyed developing it!