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I hate harem. This is the only good one, because its takes a longer time with each person. No real complaint about spelling or grammar. There is a lot of potential here, keep it up.
This novel is really great! And this Author is my first, so of course I'm his fan! anyway I don't have much to say because Im too lazy to write a descriptive review, but heres the thing. character development is actually great from the start, and I believe author will do the harem right and correct unlike many harem works; theres's legit a whole ahh chapter about the first woman and how she fell in love with mc also this novel isnt for cucks, nor for eunuchs aka. non harem lovers/harem haters.
Honestly? I missed you my first author! it's been a while since you last updated. I was afraid you'd never write anything again... But this book all in all is just too good! its only at the fifth chapter and already got me so hooked up. Your writing got even better, and I can tell you will ace in this book bro! please keep going
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
I hate harem. This is the only good one, because its takes a longer time with each person. No real complaint about spelling or grammar. There is a lot of potential here, keep it up.
This novel is really great! And this Author is my first, so of course I'm his fan! anyway I don't have much to say because Im too lazy to write a descriptive review, but heres the thing. character development is actually great from the start, and I believe author will do the harem right and correct unlike many harem works; theres's legit a whole ahh chapter about the first woman and how she fell in love with mc also this novel isnt for cucks, nor for eunuchs aka. non harem lovers/harem haters.
Honestly? I missed you my first author! it's been a while since you last updated. I was afraid you'd never write anything again... But this book all in all is just too good! its only at the fifth chapter and already got me so hooked up. Your writing got even better, and I can tell you will ace in this book bro! please keep going
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
Posting this to get my favorite book rated!!!!!!!!
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