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This book makes me want to rip my hair out, it was good at the start, but then there is a 12 year time skip. After the skip the story isn’t nearly as entertaining, and the chapters keep repeating and retconning things that just happened. One chapter will end with x character being knocked out in a room. To them have the next start with the same character outside prior to being knocked out except this time they don’t get knocked out. Or they will be going to the capitol for a ball “in a few days” to then not go to the capital right away, and when they get there they go “we have to leave because we don’t want to be near the royal family.” It’s stuff like that, that really kills my enthusiasm for this book. Though Mary is very entertaining.
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honestly was quite dissapointed. first of all the villain tag doesn't fit to Mc at all. she is more like a anti-hero, the writing was good but had lots of errors like writing same name twice or writing wrong name. there is also no update on the dragon egg that was Layla contracted with, I expected at least some info about it Even if it's a little. as the author said there was no Yuri no harem and no romance from what I see until the chapter I read there was none of it which is good. But yeah, the villain tag doesn't fit this novel, perhaps because of my perspective but the maid feeling guilty over a child is pure bullshit in my eyes. that same maid that killed 3 previous miss/Mister of hers and a full blood demon which known for their cruelty. Anyways, in any case the story was good but the maid and the way of Mc thinking and acting ruined it. I couldn't find any explanation on the magic too, the Stat menu is not shown either. overall I'm giving 3.4 was good but ruined.
It's so good. An interesting mix of very dark themes and humour. The author is quite experienced, so the writing is excellent. It reminds me of "I'm the game's villain" and is maybe even better as it has no harem and a female mc is quite interesting for a change. Im willing to pay for the locked chapters now, so that should already show my appreciation for the novel
Layla is a delight and Mary is a menace to come by. I wonder what else will happen
I like how the FL is portrayed and how she is not always crying about things being unfair. Instead, she is doing something about it on her own
More feedback = more chapters. I hope you enjoy it. No romance, no harem, no yuri. It's straight action, so I hope you enjoy it. Feedback and reviews are appreciated.
volume 1 was good despite having error on grammar and name spelling and volume 2 was quite bad with many wrong name spelling, plot hole, story from next chapter that got slightly change from previous chapter, not finishing the 3rd volume yet, author please fix your novel it got potential in it
This book makes me want to rip my hair out, it was good at the start, but then there is a 12 year time skip. After the skip the story isn’t nearly as entertaining, and the chapters keep repeating and retconning things that just happened. One chapter will end with x character being knocked out in a room. To them have the next start with the same character outside prior to being knocked out except this time they don’t get knocked out. Or they will be going to the capitol for a ball “in a few days” to then not go to the capital right away, and when they get there they go “we have to leave because we don’t want to be near the royal family.” It’s stuff like that, that really kills my enthusiasm for this book. Though Mary is very entertaining.
揭示劇透 honestly was quite dissapointed. first of all the villain tag doesn't fit to Mc at all. she is more like a anti-hero, the writing was good but had lots of errors like writing same name twice or writing wrong name. there is also no update on the dragon egg that was Layla contracted with, I expected at least some info about it Even if it's a little. as the author said there was no Yuri no harem and no romance from what I see until the chapter I read there was none of it which is good. But yeah, the villain tag doesn't fit this novel, perhaps because of my perspective but the maid feeling guilty over a child is pure bullshit in my eyes. that same maid that killed 3 previous miss/Mister of hers and a full blood demon which known for their cruelty. Anyways, in any case the story was good but the maid and the way of Mc thinking and acting ruined it. I couldn't find any explanation on the magic too, the Stat menu is not shown either. overall I'm giving 3.4 was good but ruined.
It's so good. An interesting mix of very dark themes and humour. The author is quite experienced, so the writing is excellent. It reminds me of "I'm the game's villain" and is maybe even better as it has no harem and a female mc is quite interesting for a change. Im willing to pay for the locked chapters now, so that should already show my appreciation for the novel
Layla is a delight and Mary is a menace to come by. I wonder what else will happen
I like how the FL is portrayed and how she is not always crying about things being unfair. Instead, she is doing something about it on her own
More feedback = more chapters. I hope you enjoy it. No romance, no harem, no yuri. It's straight action, so I hope you enjoy it. Feedback and reviews are appreciated.
volume 1 was good despite having error on grammar and name spelling and volume 2 was quite bad with many wrong name spelling, plot hole, story from next chapter that got slightly change from previous chapter, not finishing the 3rd volume yet, author please fix your novel it got potential in it