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five stars The story is very good, it has potential, it's the first time I've seen a Rick and Morty fanfic with Jerry as the protagonist, it's also very fun and satisfying to see the evolution of the MC, the only thing I recommend is to show more feats of Mc's intelligence
My first Rick and Morty fanfic. I felt like you rushed the early chapters a bit to much. But it’s better then dragging everything with filler chapters. Overall I enjoyed it a lot and the ending of first arc was crazy. I love reading system novels, so you can just imagine my hype at the end. Keep up the good work. Will starting giving you my power stones soon as arc 2 drops👌🏼 I will now ready your Marvel novel!
A Jerry fanfic? jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
Very good, I see a lot of potential in this story, the author has already surpassed all the other fics in which Jerry was the protagonist.....................................................................................................................
It's a really interesting fan fiction. So far everything is good but I think it's progressing too fast. It says slow steps but it's not too slow. Another thing I complain about is the lack of dialogues. For example, he reincarnated but Morty Summer never has a dialogue with Betty and this kills the liveliness. It would be much better if it was a little more detailed. Other than that, I really liked it. If there are other Rick and Morty fan fictions like this, I'm open to suggestions.
I am really enjoying this story, different most other Rick and Morty stories. Hope to see more of this because this was fun to read.
I want this prime Jerry to meet doofus Jerry and I would like to see C-137 Rick and Prime Jerry meet the Rickest Rick and the Jerrest Jerry I also think it’ll be good for the family to meet this prime Jerry imagine the smiths having the shock of their life when they realize a Jerry is going to be unstoppable and not even multiple Ricks could take him down. Plus meeting with Evil Morty oh this is gonna get good.
I'm glad to see another "rick and morty" fanfiction on Webnovel. I really don't understand why there isn't more. Anyway, as for this novel, it's pretty good and readable. The only thing I see as a problem is the too many repetitive monologues and unnecessary repetition of paragraphs of events. It's like they just struggled to complete the word count.
MC steals Rick's stuff thinking he won't know since he isn't home but what about his garage ai ?
New and refreshing Fanfic of Rick and morty, I quite enjoying reading this.... ....... ........ ........ ....... ......... ... .. ... .... ...... .... .. ..
I am convinced this was written by ai, it repeats the same phrases every other sentence, and the pacing is all over the place. wsedrftgyhuj
five stars The story is very good, it has potential, it's the first time I've seen a Rick and Morty fanfic with Jerry as the protagonist, it's also very fun and satisfying to see the evolution of the MC, the only thing I recommend is to show more feats of Mc's intelligence
My first Rick and Morty fanfic. I felt like you rushed the early chapters a bit to much. But it’s better then dragging everything with filler chapters. Overall I enjoyed it a lot and the ending of first arc was crazy. I love reading system novels, so you can just imagine my hype at the end. Keep up the good work. Will starting giving you my power stones soon as arc 2 drops👌🏼 I will now ready your Marvel novel!
A Jerry fanfic? jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
Very good, I see a lot of potential in this story, the author has already surpassed all the other fics in which Jerry was the protagonist.....................................................................................................................
It's a really interesting fan fiction. So far everything is good but I think it's progressing too fast. It says slow steps but it's not too slow. Another thing I complain about is the lack of dialogues. For example, he reincarnated but Morty Summer never has a dialogue with Betty and this kills the liveliness. It would be much better if it was a little more detailed. Other than that, I really liked it. If there are other Rick and Morty fan fictions like this, I'm open to suggestions.
I am really enjoying this story, different most other Rick and Morty stories. Hope to see more of this because this was fun to read.
I want this prime Jerry to meet doofus Jerry and I would like to see C-137 Rick and Prime Jerry meet the Rickest Rick and the Jerrest Jerry I also think it’ll be good for the family to meet this prime Jerry imagine the smiths having the shock of their life when they realize a Jerry is going to be unstoppable and not even multiple Ricks could take him down. Plus meeting with Evil Morty oh this is gonna get good.
I'm glad to see another "rick and morty" fanfiction on Webnovel. I really don't understand why there isn't more. Anyway, as for this novel, it's pretty good and readable. The only thing I see as a problem is the too many repetitive monologues and unnecessary repetition of paragraphs of events. It's like they just struggled to complete the word count.
MC steals Rick's stuff thinking he won't know since he isn't home but what about his garage ai ?
New and refreshing Fanfic of Rick and morty, I quite enjoying reading this.... ....... ........ ........ ....... ......... ... .. ... .... ...... .... .. ..
I am convinced this was written by ai, it repeats the same phrases every other sentence, and the pacing is all over the place. wsedrftgyhuj