Douluo Dalu:Breaking Clan

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Niloy_Das

MC is a COMPLETE pushover. Trust me, I am not talking about MC listening to or doing things for his family. That is normal imo. But this guys is getting pushed around by EVERYONE. From complete strangers to kids, anyone can come around and treat this MC like their dog.

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Quid_the_leach

For around 180 chapters or so. It's a pretty good novel. The premise is great. Our mc has the foreknowledge about the world and seizes all opportunities. However, after reading past that point, it's getting more and more obvious that there are glaring holes in the plot. It's like the author wants the mc to be the underdog, but the mc's foreknowledge makes that impossible, so they need to actively sabotage him. He constantly goes from being "super smart" to making subzero IQ decisions when it matters. >!Absorbing whale glue -> intentionally absorbing weaker rings Getting ALL of the spirit herbs -> giving all of them away getting spirit bones -> giving them away getting divine inheritance items -> giving them away< It's getting tedious to read this. Especially, since his sister is getting everything he's discarding. It could be justified, if we got to know her as a person, but we're not. We know nothing about this character whatsoever. There is nothing to empathize about, I couldn't care less about her.

LV 4

Takeiteasy

Hi i am just translating this by correcting some mistakes, and it's actually a pretty good Douluo Dalu fanfic. If you want get access to advanced chapters you can join Patreon

LV 14

I_Only_Love_milfs

Having a spear martial soul is very rare in soul land fics so I fully recommend this one which is like a breath of fresh air. But the problem is mc helps his family way too much which is very irritating. The mc's sister feels like a npc who only receives help from him without giving anything in return which makes the plot more unbearable. On the other hand, it has many many interesting developments which I won't spoil for you but it will makes it worth your time. By the way guys can you tell me your favourite martial soul in soul land? I like the Angel Martial Soul and Clear Sky Hammer martial soul what about you.

LV 1

Demons_Ki

not going to lie this was a big lit down i read 234 chapters it just keep getting worst he keeps letting everyone push him around calling him trash in his own house he's level 97 can't even beat a 100k soul beast without help he has a gold level body soul and over 6 100k soul rings he's ass he keep letting people that say that they going kill him in his face in he says is not my problem wtf is this at this point.

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Darkiling

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MIR_Sajeeb

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asaade9999

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DaoistN6mWpX

Yeah it is good but still he is too weak and novel update stability is not good and protagonist is bit weak good development and still has to develop

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Darkiling

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Demons_Ki

Mc is weak as ass he got like two ultimate's gold and strength and at level 98 he's ass creeks and he's not one hitting them like wtf is going here he got like six 50k ring is like six of five 100k or or over 100k soul rings so how the hell is he not one hitting them please tell me how this makes any sense at all has the author did he or she not read soul land before like he got pretty much a god level spear and a body soul that's at gold like this is getting out of hand at this point he's called a bitch every single chapter at this point by weakling's he all he say is let them be for most 240 chapters at this point like wtf is this.

LV 3

Shin7i

here review after 231 chapter, author affraid to kill tang hao, tang xiao and tang san, clear sky sect always escape when they clearly defeated, and its to much for me when i read chapter 231 tang hao, tang xiao and tang san saved by 800.000 year beast di tian with nonesense reason

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Demons_Ki

10/10 read so far this is nice :P [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Thomas_Harkness

The story had good potential but the MC is so blind and selfish that it loses its appeal very quickly, the summary makes a point of saying not a Tang San follower but fails to mention they demonize Tang San and everyone around him after stealing all the opportunities that were meant for San then bends over and takes it from Soul Hall like good little followers leaving everyone else out in the cold to suffer.

LV 13

TruthSeekingDaoist

The story is good, but from the RAWs, it is clear that the story is trying to prolong the story by making the MC less decisive.

LV 13

SukMiCokBich

I've read most of this novel's RAW chapters. The author wanted to extend the novel's runtime, so the MC wasn't as decisive as he should've been.

LV 4

captainfatbelly

idk the book feels too Chinese after all the mc gotta stay low-key and the family interactions are stupid to I dunno the book kinds sucks 2.5 outta 5

LV 12

Spelloyal

A good Soul Land fic. It's not exceptional but it's really good and the best part is that the fact that it's translated is only noticeable by some small errors that sometimes appear. The story itself lacks the problems that the vast majority of Chinese fics have, which makes this one of the rare ones that can be read without going through major rage attacks due to completely ooc characters or something like that. The only big problem with the fic is that the MC seems to be the only one with a brain and common sense, but on the other hand this is in line with what I remember of Soul Land so it's not the fic's fault... Other than that I love how the MC does a good job of reasonably pointing out the hypocrisy of Tang San and other characters without really seeming to become a bashing fic. Finally, it's worth mentioning that many people complained about MC not getting a better second soul ring to keep a low profile, as well as complaining when MC for very reasonable reasons decided not to risk a 10k+ fourth soul ring (although he ended up getting one due to a beast that was worth the risk). So if you're someone who really cares about Min Max even in the early stages that aren't very relevant in the long run, this might end up bothering you.

LV 4

NeonPLay250

I read this work on a Chinese site and I can say that it is very high quality. Of course, not without flaws. One commentator earlier mentioned the disproportionately unbalanced development of the family and literally feeding his sister with a golden spoon, although the main character gave a lot and gave up a lot for them. There are several poisonous moments that you can skip and read on. According to all the canons of Chinese authors, the plot is quite stretched out, although I must say that if San Gege or Yu xiao Pig are killed too early, the plot loses its meaning and such works are quickly abandoned. Therefore, sometimes for the plot of two bastards, an artificial "buff" is added. About the pros. The main character is smart and cautious. Not a typical main character with plot armor. The world is big and quite alive and not everything revolves around a few people. I recommend trying to read this fic.