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I love this story please don’t abandon this story I can’t wait to read the next chapter ( of the 140 characters fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff)
Excellent novel i have read the chapter on FF before he posted them here and I am very satisfied everything really good Maybe some cliché conversation every once in a while but other than those it’s okay
I really like the novel. The author adds onto itachis character and develops it toward a new goal. The conversations and actions between different characters are all very good, and fits in the story. So i would heavily recommend reading this, as it is a really good mha fanfic.
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Luck, Just wanna say. If you keep going at this story it’s gonna reach mad people. And from the looks of it. The story already has a loyal fanbase and is tuff. Keep up the work gang. Thanks for chp 17!
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I love this story please don’t abandon this story I can’t wait to read the next chapter ( of the 140 characters fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff)
Excellent novel i have read the chapter on FF before he posted them here and I am very satisfied everything really good Maybe some cliché conversation every once in a while but other than those it’s okay
I really like the novel. The author adds onto itachis character and develops it toward a new goal. The conversations and actions between different characters are all very good, and fits in the story. So i would heavily recommend reading this, as it is a really good mha fanfic.
Good ,👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Luck, Just wanna say. If you keep going at this story it’s gonna reach mad people. And from the looks of it. The story already has a loyal fanbase and is tuff. Keep up the work gang. Thanks for chp 17!
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Please don't drop this, I'm enjoying it so much. Definitely would recommend