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Broken Notes - A Two and a Half Men Fanfic

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作者: NotYggdra

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After the death of his mother, 10-year-old Nero is sent to live with Charlie Harper, an old friend of his distant father, Arthur. Charlie, a carefree bachelor known for his womanizing ways, endless supply of drinks, and laid-back Malibu lifestyle, is far from the ideal role model. Yet, amidst the chaos of Charlie's questionable choices and constant stream of party guests, Nero begins to find something he never got from his father: a sense of family. With Charlie's unfiltered humor and unconventional guidance, Nero starts to navigate the challenges of growing up and dealing with his grief.
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So yeah a Two and a half men Fanfic. What more is there to say?
I experimented a bit and revised a few chapters. It shouldn't be so emo anymore and should have more of the classic charm of TAAHM.

~Cheers


Disclaimer: The characters, stories, and songs referenced in this work are the property of their respective creators and copyright holders. I do not own any of these elements, aside from the original characters (OC) created by me. This is a fanfiction piece for transformative and non-commercial purposes. No copyright infringement is intended.

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NotYggdra

I really like the author. A little 'what if' scenario in the Two and a Half Men series is wonderfully portrayed in the Fanfic. It really kicks off in Chapter 13, but anyone who enjoys story building should definitely read the chapters before that. ~Cheers

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JustAnotherFan217

I wanna like this, I like Two and a Half Men, and I like the overall idea. The problem is that it doesn’t feel like Two and a Half men at all. The storyline has been way too heavy and dramatic for a comedy show, and Charlie feels like a completely different character. In the show Charlie struggles to be an uncle and part-time parent to Jake, and in this story he is the stereotypical perfect parent. He hasn’t hooked up with any women, hasn’t drank any alcohol, and hasn’t even cracked an innappropriate joke yet. He is emotionally available and compassionate, and is even civil to Rose without one clever insult. Feels like the author just wanted to put a background to their original story about a kids problems growing up, not a Two and a Half Men fic.

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