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I really appreciate how this fanfic took the time in fleshing out the main character Meng Xian, and the lotm main character, Zhou Mingrui. Like the previous response said, the chemistry between the two character is very sweet and genuine. I am looking forward to how the author plans to explore the world of lotm. I glad the author posted on web novel. :D Sincerely, GuestGuestReader
I have an avid interest in the Lord of the Mysteries as well as fan fiction. There have been many fan fictions that are fast paced and hollow so there is no surprise that I adore the fact that the writer took the time to develop their relationship as friends, Meng Xian as a protagonist is delightful to read especially with her interactions with Zhou Mingrui. It's charming and bittersweet that hits just right at the sweet spot. There is tangible chemistry between these two characters as friends and the potential for more is there, I as a reader can sense it. Best of all it doesn't feel forced nor coerced. It's a miracle and lucky, for I have found a writer that has a female protagonist with some semblance of life in the arcane and mystical of the world of Lord of the Mysteries. Of course, there are some improvements to be made as small as they are however the grammar from what I have read is polished and good. I look forward to more of your work, dear writer of this work.
Found this to be very interesting. I really hope to see more from this, and can't wait for Klein to meet Meng Xian again! [img=update][img=update]
I really appreciate how this fanfic took the time in fleshing out the main character Meng Xian, and the lotm main character, Zhou Mingrui. Like the previous response said, the chemistry between the two character is very sweet and genuine. I am looking forward to how the author plans to explore the world of lotm. I glad the author posted on web novel. :D Sincerely, GuestGuestReader
I have an avid interest in the Lord of the Mysteries as well as fan fiction. There have been many fan fictions that are fast paced and hollow so there is no surprise that I adore the fact that the writer took the time to develop their relationship as friends, Meng Xian as a protagonist is delightful to read especially with her interactions with Zhou Mingrui. It's charming and bittersweet that hits just right at the sweet spot. There is tangible chemistry between these two characters as friends and the potential for more is there, I as a reader can sense it. Best of all it doesn't feel forced nor coerced. It's a miracle and lucky, for I have found a writer that has a female protagonist with some semblance of life in the arcane and mystical of the world of Lord of the Mysteries. Of course, there are some improvements to be made as small as they are however the grammar from what I have read is polished and good. I look forward to more of your work, dear writer of this work.
Found this to be very interesting. I really hope to see more from this, and can't wait for Klein to meet Meng Xian again! [img=update][img=update]