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Just finished reading this in a single sitting, took me 2 days but was worth the read, The summary makes the story look shitty, but the lightheartedness the backstory, the portrayal of the Uchihas, and the other warring states clans have been very fun to read. The MC's backstory was a fun little mystery and the interactions and the system usage is pretty fun. Doesnot make the MC OP. I had a smile throughout the reading montage. Keep up the good work. Have read all the Naruto fics in your account.
Nice chapter I hope this won't became harem I don't like harem I prefer hikaru as the fml not MITO At chapter 145 overall it's still 👍 Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
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I like this so far, it has a nice mix of the Canon history from the anime and manga and seems to have a but of Gintama thrown into the mix. If it updated a little more frequently I'd give it 5 out 5.
Quite a poor story overall. The focus of the story shifted entirely from the original start. Also seemed like a system story but now it has shifted completely. Comedic element is completely gone but may come back later. There is plot within plot within plot. And several chapters almost seem like fillers from anime. The story idea is not bad but things have been dragged out too much. So it is not a bad story but it is also not fun to read
this story can only be described in 2 words. "Annoyingly comedic".I didn't think I could see a war be turned into a comedy and I kept reading for God knows why? Cause I do hate comedy.At first it wasn't terrible but when u start to change things and make stupid choices just to have comedic timing it annoys me.This story is good and could've been great but man you're comedy hasn't made me smile or laugh not 1 time.Youd be grateful if you could even catch a semblance of plot behind all that comedy.
Excelente hasta el momento no dejes de traer la historia, me preguntó Mc tendrá pareja? Y ya me imagino la cara de Tobirama y Hashirama al el Mokouton de Mc
Me preguntó que planes tiene Zetsu? O será que realmente quiere matar a todos y combinar el Sharingan de todos para luego dárselo a Madara? O puede ser cualquier cosa 🤪
It's a pretty good story, but at times I am very uncomfortable how the author describes Senju Itama, a 5-year-old child. Is he just being edgy, or does CCP need to check his hard drive?
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Muy buena historia no deja de sorprenderme y tiene sus momentos graciosos y a su vez una gran trama, espero ver los futuros desarrollos de personajes de izuna y Madara
it is really good I think the system at first is a little op but afterward it will be more balanced also i really like the interaction between madara izuna and gin
Based on the prologue and the last 30 chapters i assume Gin never reunited with Hikari that's leave a bitter taste in my mouth because i probably never be with the love of my life and i don't want to read something that mirror my life story because it's hurts, thanks for the journey though
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A very good and different story content. Waiting for many more chapters. It's too engrossing please release more chapters ASAP.
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just first chapter alone already interesting, BUT... from 2nd until 17th chapter everything became boring, zero comedy, and pure yapping AKA word count......
pretty good so far. The author hasn't groomed small children so far, so it's above average for a chinese ff
Overall i'd say its meh. It's a read that's good for killing time. Nothing amazing nothing overly bad. It has some funny moments.
Just finished reading this in a single sitting, took me 2 days but was worth the read, The summary makes the story look shitty, but the lightheartedness the backstory, the portrayal of the Uchihas, and the other warring states clans have been very fun to read. The MC's backstory was a fun little mystery and the interactions and the system usage is pretty fun. Doesnot make the MC OP. I had a smile throughout the reading montage. Keep up the good work. Have read all the Naruto fics in your account.
Nice chapter I hope this won't became harem I don't like harem I prefer hikaru as the fml not MITO At chapter 145 overall it's still 👍 Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Hello, I’m [Rishi Pandey], the owner of NOVELARC, and I’m excited to offer a fantastic opportunity for talented writers like you! We’d love for you to join our platform to publish your novel or fanfiction. As part of our program, we offer $3 per thousand views your chapters receive. Views are tracked and counted every Sunday or on the 1st day of each month, ensuring you receive accurate and timely payouts. To keep your readers engaged, we ask that you upload advance chapters of your work regularly. This will help build momentum and attract more views, ultimately maximizing your earnings. To help boost your success on NOVELARC, we recommend bringing your own readers to the platform. The more views your chapters generate, the higher your payout will be! If you're ready to join us on this exciting journey, we'd be happy to sign a contract to formalize the publishing rights for your novel or fanfiction. If you're interested in this opportunity, please feel free to reach out to me through: Instagram: [yurichi_adrenaline] Discord: [earth_19998] Alternatively, if you prefer another method of communication, just let me know and I’d be happy to reach out to you directly. Looking forward to working with passionate writers and bringing your stories to readers around the world! Best regards, [Rishi Pandey] NOVELARC
I like this so far, it has a nice mix of the Canon history from the anime and manga and seems to have a but of Gintama thrown into the mix. If it updated a little more frequently I'd give it 5 out 5.
Quite a poor story overall. The focus of the story shifted entirely from the original start. Also seemed like a system story but now it has shifted completely. Comedic element is completely gone but may come back later. There is plot within plot within plot. And several chapters almost seem like fillers from anime. The story idea is not bad but things have been dragged out too much. So it is not a bad story but it is also not fun to read
this story can only be described in 2 words. "Annoyingly comedic".I didn't think I could see a war be turned into a comedy and I kept reading for God knows why? Cause I do hate comedy.At first it wasn't terrible but when u start to change things and make stupid choices just to have comedic timing it annoys me.This story is good and could've been great but man you're comedy hasn't made me smile or laugh not 1 time.Youd be grateful if you could even catch a semblance of plot behind all that comedy.
Excelente hasta el momento no dejes de traer la historia, me preguntó Mc tendrá pareja? Y ya me imagino la cara de Tobirama y Hashirama al el Mokouton de Mc
Me preguntó que planes tiene Zetsu? O será que realmente quiere matar a todos y combinar el Sharingan de todos para luego dárselo a Madara? O puede ser cualquier cosa 🤪
It's a pretty good story, but at times I am very uncomfortable how the author describes Senju Itama, a 5-year-old child. Is he just being edgy, or does CCP need to check his hard drive?
Apakah ini novel china,? Sangat bagus [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Muy buena historia no deja de sorprenderme y tiene sus momentos graciosos y a su vez una gran trama, espero ver los futuros desarrollos de personajes de izuna y Madara
it is really good I think the system at first is a little op but afterward it will be more balanced also i really like the interaction between madara izuna and gin
Based on the prologue and the last 30 chapters i assume Gin never reunited with Hikari that's leave a bitter taste in my mouth because i probably never be with the love of my life and i don't want to read something that mirror my life story because it's hurts, thanks for the journey though
揭示劇透 A very good and different story content. Waiting for many more chapters. It's too engrossing please release more chapters ASAP.
till now its pretty good ... .......................................................................................................... ......................
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just first chapter alone already interesting, BUT... from 2nd until 17th chapter everything became boring, zero comedy, and pure yapping AKA word count......
pretty good so far. The author hasn't groomed small children so far, so it's above average for a chinese ff
Overall i'd say its meh. It's a read that's good for killing time. Nothing amazing nothing overly bad. It has some funny moments.