Naruto: Konoha's Psychic

LV 2

R0B

I like psychic idea, but you could do better than that.. The first mistake is to start the story 3 weeks after reincarnation - there's no reason to do that. In other words there's no proper introduction to mc and his abilities. Now when he uses his psychic abilities (basically only telekinesis) they seem wonky - not fleshed out at all. Also, from readers perspective mc is very arrogant. Everyone in his circle follow him like idiots. He even provoked the Hokage in his office! Sorry to say this, but this ff is mediocre.

LV 14

Transhumanist

Wow the whole psychokinesis stuff only amounted to immobilizing weaker shinobi and remotely manipulating kunai. What a letdown. The MC's character leaves much to be desired he gets attacked by Danzo and Hiruzen's minions but he ignores it and continues being a happy go lucky guy without any retribution , he has a theoretically very powerful and versatile ability which he uses for throwing kunai at people. Just so disappointing man. One of the blandest Naruto fanfic MC's I've ever read.

LV 4

Guaca

Don’t even have to read it I know this is fire cause Hkj is the author

LV 4

Novel_Guru

okish, could be better. MC is beta, I feel it's Chinese fic sometimes. Author?

LV 13

MarkinHotties

Its a solid start to a novel, somewhat slow paced but it does have its specialities.

LV 1

pharos1701

Keep up the good work

LV 4

PunchingDrywallMan

I'm enjoying the story. Keep up the good work, author.

LV 2

Shnh_Kusuma_3576

very good the psychic idea in the world of Naruto is really interesting, I hope the plot isn't too slow, it's really boring.....................

LV 15

Vaperrapter

Story is still at the beginning. Not much has happened. Grammer is good. Characters could be better written, but they are fine. My only concern is update stability and the chance of this being dropped like the author’s previous novels.