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brilliant effort, i know that its almost all new writing and that you changed some truly horrid and repetitive stuff, so thx for that
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I just started reading today, and I am caught up to chapter 70. This fic is really good, I've been looking for smth like this focused on the NBA with players that I'm actually familiar with and no constant interference from a system.
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brilliant effort, i know that its almost all new writing and that you changed some truly horrid and repetitive stuff, so thx for that
I just started reading today, and I am caught up to chapter 70. This fic is really good, I've been looking for smth like this focused on the NBA with players that I'm actually familiar with and no constant interference from a system.